App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and provide specific reasons why you find the app captivating. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Recently, I have used several apps like Instagram, Snapchat, and Facebook. However, I have been using Snapchat the most because I enjoy playing fun tricks with my friends and family. This app is quite captivating because it allows me to share creative photos and videos easily.

제안: Your answer shows your interest but lacks clarity and has repetition. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating the same ideas.

예시: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram because I enjoy creating reels for entertainment. Additionally, I like sharing my feelings and experiences on the platform, which helps me connect with others.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Explain how you discover new apps and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually find out about different apps through advertisements on social media or app stores. However, I mainly use Instagram because I enjoy creating content for entertainment and expressing myself. It also helps me stay connected with my friends, which makes it fun.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to provide a complete response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. You can express uncertainty but also mention the types of apps you might be interested in using in the future. Use proper grammar and linking words.

예시: I am not sure which types of apps I will use in the future, but I am open to trying different kinds. For example, I might use educational apps to learn new skills or health apps to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

× Well in the modern time I have a lots of apps like Instagram, Snapchat and Facebook also.

✓ Well, in modern times I have a lot of apps like Instagram, Snapchat, and Facebook also.

The phrase 'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot of' when referring to many items. Also, 'modern time' should be pluralized to 'modern times' to refer to the current era generally.

× But recently I used a Snapchat because I make this trick with my friends and family also.

✓ But recently I used Snapchat because I made this trick with my friends and family also.

The verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to match the past action indicated by 'recently' and 'used'. Also, 'a Snapchat' is incorrect; 'Snapchat' is a proper noun and does not need an article.

× It is a quite captivating for me.

✓ It is quite captivating for me.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'quite captivating' because 'captivating' is an adjective here, not a noun. The correct phrase is 'quite captivating' without 'a'.

× Mostly I I am interested in Instagram because I'm making the reels and for entertainment purp purpose and mostly I enjoy Instagram because I like sharing with my feelings or anything.

✓ Mostly, I am interested in Instagram because I make reels for entertainment purposes, and I enjoy Instagram because I like sharing my feelings and other things.

The sentence has repetition ('Mostly I I'), awkward phrasing ('making the reels and for entertainment purp purpose'), and unclear expressions ('sharing with my feelings or anything'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Will I find out different apps on with the help of advertisement?

✓ I find out about different apps with the help of advertisements.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Will I' to ask a question, but the intended meaning is a statement about how the student discovers apps. Also, 'on with the help of advertisement' is incorrect preposition usage.

× I am interested in only Instagram because I enjoying creating deals for entertainment and self-expression.

✓ I am interested only in Instagram because I enjoy creating reels for entertainment and self-expression.

The verb 'enjoying' should be 'enjoy' to match the present tense. Also, 'deals' is likely a typo for 'reels'. The adverb 'only' should be placed before 'in Instagram' for correct emphasis.

× I am also like using the app to share my feelings to with the connect with friends and which make it is a fun.

✓ I also like using the app to share my feelings and connect with friends, which makes it fun.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and preposition usage ('to with the connect with friends'), and awkward phrasing ('which make it is a fun'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I have no idea which type of application in my future, but I am gonna to be in trust to use a different kind of application in the.

✓ I have no idea which type of application I will use in the future, but I am going to try different kinds of applications.

The phrase 'gonna to be in trust to use' is incorrect; the correct future tense expression is 'going to try'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and awkwardly phrased; correcting it improves clarity and grammar.