App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "post reels, stories on it" which can be simplified. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I have recently been using Instagram, a social media platform where I share photos and post stories. I find it very interesting and engaging because it allows me to connect with friends and express myself creatively.

제안: Try to avoid grammatical errors such as "that apps" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific about why you like social media apps.

예시: I am usually interested in social media apps because they allow me to share my stories and stay connected with friends who live far away. For example, I post regularly to keep in touch and feel involved in their lives.

제안: Your answer lacks a proper subject and could be more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'app' unnecessarily and be more specific about the process.

예시: I usually find out about different apps through advertisements on social media and recommendations in my App Store. These sources help me discover new apps and explore their features.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure by using correct prepositions and plural forms. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating phrases and be more concise.

예시: In the future, I would like to use movie streaming apps like Netflix and Amazon Prime because currently I cannot afford their premium subscriptions. Therefore, I am looking forward to trying these apps when possible.

× I find that a very interesting and engaging.

✓ I find that very interesting and engaging.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjectives 'very interesting and engaging'. Since these adjectives are used predicatively without a noun, the article should be omitted to maintain correct grammar.

× I like that apps because I like to share my stories on it and I always post regularly and it also help me to stay connected with my friends who live far away from me.

✓ I like those apps because I like to share my stories on them and I always post regularly and they also help me to stay connected with my friends who live far away from me.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'apps'; it should be 'those'. Also, the pronouns referring to 'apps' should be plural ('them', 'they') to agree with the plural noun. Additionally, the verb 'help' should be 'help' with 'they' as the subject.

× Get to know about different apps by the frequent advertising on other social media platforms or through the app recommendations in my App Store.

✓ I get to know about different apps through frequent advertising on other social media platforms or through app recommendations in my App Store.

The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding the subject 'I' and adjusting the preposition usage improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× This helps me to discover new apps and try out the benefits of using that app.

✓ This helps me to discover new apps and try out the benefits of using those apps.

The pronoun 'that' is singular but refers to 'apps' which is plural. It should be 'those apps' to maintain number agreement. Also, 'try out the benefits' is acceptable but 'try the benefits' is more common; however, the main issue is pronoun agreement.

× Currently I cannot afford the premium subscription of that apps.

✓ Currently I cannot afford the premium subscription of those apps.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'apps'; it should be 'those' to agree in number.

× So in future I'm looking forward to use that apps.

✓ So in the future I'm looking forward to using those apps.

The phrase 'looking forward to' should be followed by a gerund ('using') not the base form of the verb. Also, 'that apps' should be 'those apps' to agree in number, and 'in future' is better expressed as 'in the future'.