App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“communicate me with the WeChat”应改为“communicate with me on WeChat”。建议注意介词的使用和句子结构，使表达更地道。

예시: I recently used WeChat. Before my exams, my parents and friends always communicate with me on WeChat to encourage me. It is the most important platform in my daily life.

제안: 回答中缺少主语和时态错误，如“I usually interested”应为“I am usually interested”。此外，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词并注意单复数一致。

예시: I am usually interested in apps that can improve people's communication. For example, I spend a lot of time on platforms like Red Node, WeChat, and QQ because they are significant ways to enhance my communication skills.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“what they are use recently”应为“what they have been using recently”。建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更准确。

예시: I find out about different apps through recommendations from my friends or family members. They tell me what they have been using recently, and if they find an app nice and challenging, they recommend it to me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“apps that contains”应为“apps that contain”，以及表达重复和不自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I would like to use apps that contain AI technology because, as far as I am concerned, AI will improve significantly in the future and greatly help our daily lives.

× Before I have an examination, my parents and my friends always communicate me with the WeChat to encourage me.

✓ Before I have an examination, my parents and my friends always communicate with me on WeChat to encourage me.

动词 communicate 通常与介词 with 连用，表示“与某人交流”，而不是直接加宾语。原句中错误地使用了 communicate me with，应该改为 communicate with me。

× I usually interested in apps that can improve people's communication.

✓ I am usually interested in apps that can improve people's communication.

主语 I 后面缺少系动词 am，导致句子缺少谓语动词，时态使用不正确。正确表达为 I am usually interested。

× For example, I spend lots of my time on the platform like Red Node, WeChat and QQ because it is a significant ways to improve my communication skills.

✓ For example, I spend lots of my time on platforms like Red Node, WeChat and QQ because they are significant ways to improve my communication skills.

platform 是单数，后面列举了多个平台，应使用复数 platforms；it 指代复数应改为 they；ways 是复数，谓语动词也应改为复数形式 are。

× They will tell me what they are use recently and if they feel it is nice and challenging they will recommend it to me to enjoy it.

✓ They will tell me what they are using recently and if they feel it is nice and challenging they will recommend it to me to enjoy it.

现在进行时态中，动词 use 应使用现在分词形式 using，表示“他们最近正在使用”。

× I would like to use some apps that contains the AI technology because as far as I'm concerned with the development of the technology, AI technology will be more and more better in the future and it will help our daily life a lot.

✓ I would like to use some apps that contain AI technology because as far as I'm concerned with the development of the technology, AI technology will be better and better in the future and it will help our daily life a lot.

apps 是复数，关系代词 that 后的动词应使用复数形式 contain；more and more better 是错误表达，better 已经是比较级，不能与 more 连用，应改为 better and better。