App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by avoiding incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, clarify the purpose and outcome of using the apps.

예시: Recently, I used two English learning apps. One is called Laura, and the other is a speaking app through which I am now interacting with you. I installed these apps to improve my English speaking skills. Although I uninstalled them recently, they helped me make some progress.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a topic sentence and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repeating similar phrases.

예시: I am usually interested in apps that assist me in teaching my child. For instance, apps that improve her speech clarity, enhance her pronunciation, and motivate her to practice daily.

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise by using proper tenses and linking words. Avoid redundancy and clarify your process step by step.

예시: I usually go directly to the Apple Store and search for the apps I need. Then, I download and try several apps, deleting those that are not helpful.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Use linking words to explain your idea clearly and provide more details about why you want such an app.

예시: In the future, I would like to use an app that has two-sided blanks for conversations. This way, I can fill in a question on one side and write the answer on the other, which would help me practice dialogues more effectively.

× Recently I have uninstalled 2 apps for English learning.

✓ Recently I have uninstalled 2 apps for English learning.

No correction needed here as '2 apps' correctly uses the plural form.

× One app is called Laura and the other app is also speaking through which now I'm interacting with you.

✓ One app is called Laura and the other app is also a speaking app through which now I'm interacting with you.

The phrase 'the other app is also speaking' is unclear and missing a noun after 'speaking'. Adding 'a speaking app' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I installed these apps to help me improve my English speaking so I can progress but.

✓ I installed these apps to help me improve my English speaking so I can progress.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'but' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'but' completes the sentence properly.

× Apps that help me teach my child how to improve her speech, how to clear her pronunciation, and how to motivate her into practicing every single day.

✓ Apps that help me teach my child how to improve her speech, how to clear her pronunciation, and how to motivate her to practice every single day.

The phrase 'motivate her into practicing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' followed by the base verb 'practice'.

× I directly go to the Apple store and I search for whatever application that I wish is there in the market and I try downloading some, trying some and then whatever is not helpful I deleted.

✓ I directly go to the Apple Store and search for whatever application I wish is available in the market. I try downloading some, trying some, and then delete whatever is not helpful.

'Apple store' should be capitalized as 'Apple Store'. The phrase 'that I wish is there in the market' is awkward; 'I wish is available in the market' is better. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'I try downloading' and 'then delete' instead of 'deleted' to maintain present tense narrative.

× I have been searching for an application that have a 2 sided blanks for having a conversation between two people where I can fill a question in one column and answer in another.

✓ I have been searching for an application that has two-sided blanks for having a conversation between two people where I can fill a question in one column and an answer in another.

The subject 'an application' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, '2 sided blanks' should be 'two-sided blanks' for correct adjective form and spelling. Adding 'an' before 'answer' improves clarity.