App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、文法を正しく使い、具体的なアプリ名や機能を明確に述べることが重要です。

예시: I recently used an app called "SpeakUp" that evaluates my speaking skills and gives me a score. It has been very helpful for improving my English.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が曖昧です。質問に対して直接答え、興味のあるアプリの種類を具体的に述べ、理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I usually install apps that challenge my thinking, like puzzle games, because I enjoy solving problems in my free time.

제안: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。時制を正しく使い、流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を活用し、具体的な方法を詳しく説明しましょう。

예시: Usually, when I want to do something, I search on Google to find apps that can help me with that task.

제안: 文法の誤りがあり、文章の構造が不自然です。将来使いたいアプリの種類を明確に述べ、理由や計画を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: In the future, I would like to use investment apps because I am interested in investing but haven't started yet. These apps can help me learn and manage my investments easily.

× I recently used the.

✓ I recently used an app.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'used the'. It should specify what was used, such as 'an app'. This is a sentence structure error because the sentence does not form a complete thought.

× Are you speaking up to?

✓ Are you speaking up to it?

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'it' after the phrasal verb 'speaking up to'. Without the object, the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× It evaluate my speaking skills and shoulder score that they expected.

✓ It evaluates my speaking skills and shows the score that they expect.

The verbs 'evaluate' and 'shoulder' are incorrect here. 'Evaluate' should be in third person singular form 'evaluates' to agree with 'It'. 'Shoulder' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'show'. Also, 'that they expected' should be 'that they expect' to maintain present tense consistency.

× It is very helpful for me.

✓ It is very helpful to me.

The preposition 'for' is less common in this context; 'helpful to me' is the more natural collocation in English.

× I don't install apps.

✓ I don't usually install apps.

The sentence lacks an adverb to indicate frequency. Adding 'usually' clarifies that the speaker does not often install apps, which fits the intended meaning.

× It's not essential, but I sometimes do it to kill the time so that I often installed.

✓ It's not essential, but I sometimes do it to kill time, so I often install apps.

'Kill the time' should be 'kill time' without 'the'. 'I often installed' is past tense and inconsistent; it should be present tense 'I often install'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs to be split for clarity.

× I often be interested in the apps which need to think.

✓ I am often interested in apps that require thinking.

'I often be interested' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am often interested'. 'The apps which need to think' is awkward; 'apps that require thinking' is more natural.

× Usually I when I want to do something, I googled it then I found out the apps that I want to do.

✓ Usually, when I want to do something, I google it and then find the apps that I want to use.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'I googled' and 'I found out' should be present tense 'I google' and 'I find'. 'The apps that I want to do' is incorrect; it should be 'apps that I want to use'.

× I would like to use the investment apps.

✓ I would like to use investment apps.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because 'investment apps' is a general category.

× I have been interested in the investment but I am too lazy to study about the investments so I never start.

✓ I have been interested in investment, but I am too lazy to study investments, so I have never started.

'The investment' should be 'investment' without 'the'. 'Study about' is incorrect; it should be 'study'. 'I never start' should be present perfect 'I have never started' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now.

× But in the future if after starting investment I would like to use it.

✓ But in the future, after starting investment, I would like to use it.

The sentence is missing commas for clarity. Also, 'if after starting investment' is awkward; it should be 'after starting investment' without 'if'.