App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“recommendation in the city”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，同时增加细节使回答更具体。

예시: I recently used the Little Red Book app to find recommendations for popular restaurants and attractions in my city.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“shop with you apps”和“queue the time”表达不准确，建议使用正确的词汇表达兴趣的应用类型，并说明原因。

예시: I'm usually interested in gaming apps and shopping apps because they help me pass the time and relax effectively.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，且表达不连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并准确描述寻找应用的方法。

예시: Sometimes I search the App Store to find new and interesting apps, and other times I learn about them through advertisements on websites.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达不够自然，如“pick pictures”应改为“take pictures”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

예시: In the future, I'd like to use apps that help me record my daily life, such as taking photos and keeping track of important appointments.

× I recently used the Little Red Book to search for some information about recommendation in the city.

✓ I recently used the Little Red Book to search for some information about recommendations in the city.

recommendation 应该用复数形式 recommendations，因为这里指的是多条推荐信息。

× I'm usually interested in several game apps and shop with you apps because they can help me queue the time and relax myself efficiently.

✓ I'm usually interested in several game apps and shopping apps because they can help me save time and relax myself efficiently.

shop with you apps 这个短语不正确，应该用 shopping apps 表示购物类应用。queue the time 也不合适，应该用 save time 表达节省时间。

× And sometimes I just search the App Store and find several interesting new apps and other times and I say the advertisements from other Internet websites.

✓ Sometimes I just search the App Store and find several interesting new apps, and other times I see advertisements on other Internet websites.

句子结构混乱，and other times and I say 不通顺，应该改为 and other times I see，且用 on 表示在网站上看到广告。

× Sometimes I just search the App Store and find several interesting new apps and other times and I say the advertisements from other Internet websites.

✓ Sometimes I just search the App Store and find several interesting new apps, and other times I see advertisements on other Internet websites.

from other Internet websites 应该用 on other Internet websites，表示在网站上看到广告。

× I'd like to use several apps that can help me record the daily life. For example, I can pick pictures with it and I can write down the important appointments on it.

✓ I'd like to use several apps that can help me record daily life. For example, I can pick pictures with it and write down important appointments on it.

record the daily life 中的 the 不需要，daily life 是泛指。write down the important appointments 中的 the 也不需要，泛指重要的约会。