App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“wearing films”应为“watching films”，且表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达自己常用的视频类应用，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: I have recently used several video apps because I enjoy watching films and videos in my free time.

제안: 回答重复且表达不流畅，存在语法错误，如“read some videos”应为“watch videos”。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达兴趣和原因。

예시: I am usually interested in video apps because they help me relax by watching movies and videos after a busy day.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达如何发现新应用，并注意语法和逻辑连贯。

예시: I usually don't have much time to look for new apps, so I stick to the ones I know. Sometimes, I discover new apps when I go shopping with my friends.

제안: 回答表达了想法，但句子结构和用词不够准确，如“which can match my skirts with my shirt”应更自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me coordinate my outfits, such as matching skirts with shirts and suggesting suitable shoes.

× I usually use some video apps because I like wearing films and some videos so I think I usually steal the most apps is watching apps.

✓ I usually use some video apps because I like watching films and some videos, so I think the apps I use the most are watching apps.

动词后面应该用动名词形式（watching），而不是错误的单词（wearing）。此外，句子结构不清晰，需调整使表达更准确。

× I'm interested in video apps because I think I can get some relaxation when I read some videos and movies.

✓ I'm interested in video apps because I think I can get some relaxation when I watch some videos and movies.

动词后面应该用动名词形式（watch），而不是错误的动词（read）。视频和电影是观看的对象，不是阅读的。

× So I usually watching some videos watching apps.

✓ So I usually watch some videos on watching apps.

动词前不应该加助动词“usually”后直接跟动词的现在分词形式，正确用法是动词原形（watch）。

× So I think I use watching apps often.

✓ So I think I often use watching apps.

副词“often”应放在助动词和动词之间或句首，且“use”后不应加动名词形式。

× I usually use the same apps when I watching I want to find something.

✓ I usually use the same apps when I want to find something.

“when I watching”中“watching”应改为动词原形“watch”或改写句子，这里应去掉“watching”使句子通顺。

× I often find some new apps when go shopping with my friends or with my.

✓ I often find some new apps when I go shopping with my friends or with my family.

句子缺少主语“I”，且“with my”后缺少名词，需补充完整。

× If I do not have a good choice, they can give me some advice about what kind of shoes I can have.

✓ If I do not have a good choice, they can give me some advice about what kind of shoes I should have.

“can have”表达不准确，建议用“should have”表示建议。