App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변에서 중복되는 단어 사용과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만들기 위해 불필요한 반복을 줄이고, 동사 형태를 정확히 사용하세요. 또한, 구체적인 예시를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

예시: Recently, I have been using YouTube a lot because I enjoy watching gaming channels. They are very entertaining and help me learn new strategies.

제안: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'to have my daily life' 같은 표현 대신 자연스러운 영어 표현을 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 또한, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

예시: I am usually interested in Instagram because it offers many videos about daily activities like exercising and cooking, which provide useful information to improve my lifestyle.

제안: 중복된 단어 사용과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'Internet has many information' 대신 'the Internet has a lot of information'과 같이 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I usually search for different apps on the Internet because it provides a lot of information about popular apps like Instagram and YouTube, helping me decide which ones to download.

제안: 답변에 반복과 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'instagrams'는 단수형 'Instagram'으로 수정하고, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한, 구체적인 이유를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

예시: In the future, I would like to continue using apps like Instagram and YouTube because they are very useful and provide me with valuable information to improve my daily life.

× Recently I have used some YouTube because I I I love to watching YouTube channels like play playing game that I play that is so fun.

✓ Recently I have used YouTube because I love watching YouTube channels like playing games that I play; that is so fun.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'watching' instead of 'to watching'. Also, 'play playing game' is incorrect; it should be 'playing games'. This is a common error where the verb form after certain verbs like 'love' should be the '-ing' form (gerund).

× Recently I have used some YouTube because I I I love to watching YouTube channels like play playing game that I play that is so fun.

✓ Recently I have used YouTube because I love watching YouTube channels like playing games that I play; that is so fun.

The word 'some' is incorrectly used before 'YouTube' which is a proper noun and uncountable in this context. 'Some' is used with countable plural or uncountable nouns, but not with proper nouns like 'YouTube'.

× Maybe Instagram because I I can see many videos to have my daily life such as exercising and cooking so I have many information to upgrade my life.

✓ Maybe Instagram because I can see many videos about my daily life such as exercising and cooking, so I have a lot of information to improve my life.

The phrase 'to have my daily life' is incorrect; it should be 'about my daily life'. Also, 'many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; it should be 'a lot of information'. The pronoun 'I I' is repeated unnecessarily.

× Maybe Instagram because I I can see many videos to have my daily life such as exercising and cooking so I have many information to upgrade my life.

✓ Maybe Instagram because I can see many videos about my daily life such as exercising and cooking, so I have a lot of information to improve my life.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'have my daily life'; the correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the content of the videos.

× I can usually search different apps on on the Internet because Internet has many information such as Instagram, YouTube and other things. So I can get many information to download apps.

✓ I can usually search for different apps on the Internet because the Internet has a lot of information such as Instagram, YouTube, and other things. So I can get a lot of information to download apps.

'Many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; it should be 'a lot of information'. Also, 'search different apps' should be 'search for different apps'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Internet'.

× I can usually search different apps on on the Internet because Internet has many information such as Instagram, YouTube and other things. So I can get many information to download apps.

✓ I can usually search for different apps on the Internet because the Internet has a lot of information such as Instagram, YouTube, and other things. So I can get a lot of information to download apps.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by the object. Also, 'on on' is a repetition error.

× I can usually search different apps on on the Internet because Internet has many information such as Instagram, YouTube and other things. So I can get many information to download apps.

✓ I can usually search for different apps on the Internet because the Internet has a lot of information such as Instagram, YouTube, and other things. So I can get a lot of information to download apps.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Internet' because it is a unique entity. Omitting 'the' is a common error.

× I would I would like to use some instagrams and YouTube still in my future because that these apps really useful in my life, they give me many information to live more useful helpful.

✓ I would like to use Instagram and YouTube in the future because these apps are really useful in my life; they give me a lot of information to live more usefully and helpfully.

'Instagrams' is incorrect because 'Instagram' is a proper noun and uncountable here. 'Many information' should be 'a lot of information'. Also, 'useful helpful' needs to be corrected to adverbs 'usefully and helpfully' to modify 'live'.

× I would I would like to use some instagrams and YouTube still in my future because that these apps really useful in my life, they give me many information to live more useful helpful.

✓ I would like to use Instagram and YouTube in the future because these apps are really useful in my life; they give me a lot of information to live more usefully and helpfully.

The phrase 'live more useful helpful' is incorrect because 'useful' and 'helpful' are adjectives, but here adverbs are needed to modify the verb 'live'. The correct forms are 'usefully' and 'helpfully'.