App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词时态和单复数形式不正确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意动词时态的一致性，避免语法错误，同时简化表达，使回答更自然。

예시: I have recently used many apps. For example, some apps are for entertainment, like playing games or watching TV, while others help me with work or study, such as managing my calendar or chatting with colleagues.

제안: 回答中缺少动词be的正确形式，且表达稍显重复。建议注意语法完整性，使用更丰富的词汇表达兴趣，并避免重复。

예시: I am usually interested in apps that offer excitement and entertainment. For instance, I often use TikTok to play games and listen to music simultaneously, which helps me relax and unwind.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题。建议注意介词和冠词的使用，句子结构应更简洁明了，提升表达的逻辑性。

예시: Sometimes my friends recommend useful and interesting apps to me. Other times, I browse posts on social media platforms like TikTok or Xiaohongshu, where I can discover many new apps.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不完整且不连贯。建议注意句子完整性，避免句子中断，使用恰当的词汇表达未来计划，并提供具体例子。

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me improve myself. For example, I plan to use language learning and fitness apps because they are beneficial for my studies and personal growth.

× I have recently use a lot of apps.

✓ I have recently used a lot of apps.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式，use的过去分词是used。

× such as manage my calendar or just chatting with my.

✓ such as managing my calendar or just chatting with my friends.

such as后面应该接动名词形式(managing)，并且句子缺少宾语，应该补充完整。

× I interested in apps which could provide me excitement and entertainment.

✓ I am interested in apps which could provide me excitement and entertainment.

这里缺少系动词am，表达“我对……感兴趣”需要用be动词。

× Sometimes my friends will recommend me some useful and interesting apps, other times I may just check the strategies post on the social medias like Tiktok or Xiaohongshu through which I could find many interesting apps.

✓ Sometimes my friends will recommend some useful and interesting apps to me, other times I may just check the strategy posts on social media like Tiktok or Xiaohongshu through which I can find many interesting apps.

recommend后面接人时需要用recommend something to someone；social media是不可数名词，不用复数形式；strategy post应为strategy posts。

× So I would choose some functional apps that is beneficial for my studying and growth like language learning or fitness for example.

✓ So I would choose some functional apps that are beneficial for my studying and growth like language learning or fitness for example.

apps是复数，关系代词that指代复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are。

× Recently I have realized a very useful.

✓ Recently I have realized a very useful app.

句子缺少宾语，导致结构不完整，应补充宾语。