App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'mostly' and improve sentence structure for fluency. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I mostly use Facebook and Instagram. Recently, I have started exploring TikTok, but I don't spend much time watching videos there.

제안: Good content but improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about app types and use plural forms correctly.

예시: I usually prefer apps that boost my productivity, such as to-do lists and note-taking apps. Although I enjoy some entertainment apps, my main focus is on productivity.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct prepositions and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points with linking words.

예시: I usually learn about new apps from my friends, who keep me updated with the latest information. For example, a friend recently recommended the Alice speaking practice test app, which I find very helpful for improving my skills.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and natural. Use plural forms correctly and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repeating similar phrases.

예시: In the future, I would like to use more productivity apps because they help me stay focused on my goals, even though I use my phone daily. Therefore, I will prioritize productive apps over entertainment ones.

× I use Facebook, Instagram mostly.

✓ I mostly use Facebook and Instagram.

The adverb 'mostly' should be placed before the main verb 'use' to follow correct adverb placement rules in English.

× I am not used to spend a lot of time watching reels and videos.

✓ I am not used to spending a lot of time watching reels and videos.

After 'used to' (meaning accustomed to), the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'spend' should be 'spending'.

× I mostly use those kind of apps that makes me more productive, so somewhere between entertainment and productivity.

✓ I mostly use those kinds of apps that make me more productive, so somewhere between entertainment and productivity.

'Those kind' should be pluralized to 'those kinds' to agree with plural 'apps', and the verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'apps'.

× I primarily focus on productivity, so apps such as To Do List, making notes is what I'm really interested in.

✓ I primarily focus on productivity, so apps such as To Do List and making notes are what I'm really interested in.

The phrase 'such as To Do List, making notes' needs a conjunction 'and' to connect the items properly, and the verb should be plural 'are' to agree with plural subject 'apps'.

× Mostly from the friends, they keep me updated about the latest news and latest information regarding the different apps.

✓ Mostly from friends, they keep me updated about the latest news and information regarding different apps.

'The friends' is incorrect here because it refers to a specific group; 'friends' without 'the' is more appropriate. Also, 'latest' is repeated unnecessarily before 'information'.

× So I recently reached out to the friend and he suggested me to happy use this Alice speaking practice test app which is very interesting and it helps me to test my skills.

✓ So I recently reached out to a friend and he suggested I happily use this Alice speaking practice test app, which is very interesting and helps me test my skills.

'The friend' should be 'a friend' as it is not a specific known person. 'Suggested me to happy use' is incorrect; it should be 'suggested I happily use' with the verb in base form and adverb 'happily'. Also, 'helps me to test' can be simplified to 'helps me test'.

× I think in the future I'll tend to be more focused on those kind of apps, which makes me more productive.

✓ I think in the future I'll tend to be more focused on those kinds of apps, which make me more productive.

'Those kind' should be pluralized to 'those kinds' to agree with plural 'apps', and the verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'apps'.

× I love these kind of apps because they help me focus on my goals even though I'm using these phones daily.

✓ I love these kinds of apps because they help me focus on my goals even though I'm using these phones daily.

'These kind' should be pluralized to 'these kinds' to agree with plural 'apps'.

× So mostly I'll be focusing on the productive side rather than just for the entertainment.

✓ So mostly I'll be focusing on the productive side rather than just on entertainment.

'Just for the entertainment' is awkward; 'just on entertainment' is more natural. Also, 'the entertainment' is unnecessary here.