App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“like use the WeChat”应为“like to use WeChat”。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用，并避免重复表达。

예시: I often use social media apps like WeChat because I like to keep in touch with my close friends through it.

제안: 回答较长且有重复，且语法错误较多，如“like use these apps”应为“like to use these apps”，“share my daily pictures to them”应为“share my daily pictures with them”。建议简洁表达并注意介词使用。

예시: I am usually interested in social media apps like WeChat because I can chat with my close friends and share my daily pictures with them.

제안: 回答中有不连贯和不清晰的部分，如“We come foundations”无意义，且表达不够具体。建议提高表达的连贯性和逻辑性，避免无意义的词语。

예시: I usually discover new apps, such as social media or entertainment apps, through recommendations from my close friends because we share common interests.

제안: 回答中重复使用“I think”和“friends”，显得冗余。建议使用多样的表达方式，避免重复，并使句子更简洁自然。

예시: In the future, I would like to continue using social media apps to stay connected with my close friends and share my daily photos with them.

× I often use some social media like we Chat because I like use the WeChat to keep in touch with my close friends.

✓ I often use some social media like WeChat because I like using WeChat to keep in touch with my close friends.

动词like后面应接动名词形式using，而不是动词原形use。

× I am interested in some apps like social media apps because I like use these apps such as WeChat to have a conversation with my close friends and I want to share my daily pictures to them.

✓ I am interested in some apps like social media apps because I like using these apps such as WeChat to have a conversation with my close friends and I want to share my daily pictures with them.

动词like后应接动名词using，而不是动词原形use；另外，动词share后应接介词with而不是to。

× I want to share my daily pictures to them.

✓ I want to share my daily pictures with them.

动词share后应使用介词with表示“与某人分享”，而不是to。

× We come foundations.

✓ We have common foundations.

原句结构不完整且表达不清，应改为完整表达“我们有共同的基础”。

× I want to share my daily pictures to them.

✓ I want to share my daily pictures with them.

动词share后应使用介词with表示“与某人分享”，而不是to。