App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，应该使用过去时或现在完成时来描述最近使用的应用。此外，句子结构较为简单，且结尾有语法不完整的问题。建议注意时态一致性，避免句子冗长且不完整。

예시: Recently, I have been using social apps like WeChat very frequently. I use it almost every day to communicate with my family, friends, and colleagues.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱且重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I am usually interested in social apps like WeChat and QQ, as well as music apps such as Wang Yi Music, QQ Music, and Spotify because they help me stay connected and enjoy my favorite songs.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整的问题，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的表达，避免口语化的填充词，并确保句子完整。

예시: I usually use my iPhone's App Store to search for different apps. Additionally, I read reviews and recommendations to find useful apps for daily use.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子结构可以更简洁，且连接词使用不够自然。建议优化句子结构，使用更自然的连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Recently, I discovered a useful app called Shambe Oral English, which offers valuable teaching resources and oral videos. Therefore, I plan to use it frequently in the future.

× Recently, I use my social apps, WeChat quite frequently.

✓ Recently, I have been using my social apps, WeChat, quite frequently.

这里描述的是最近一段时间的动作，应该用现在完成进行时表示持续的动作，而不是一般现在时。

× it's a basic tool for me to communicate with my families or my friends or my colleagues and.

✓ it's a basic tool for me to communicate with my family, my friends, or my colleagues.

family通常作为不可数名词或集合名词使用，不用复数形式families。

× Why are you interested in some apps like some social apps like I mentioned before we chat or QQ and also interested in some music apps like Wang Yi music and QQ music and even Spotify.

✓ I am interested in some apps, like social apps such as WeChat or QQ, and also music apps like Wang Yi Music, QQ Music, and even Spotify.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。需要调整句子结构，使其完整且通顺。

× Well, I'll just use my iPhone to search different apps and you know, there's an app called App Store and I can search all of apps that I wanted on this apps.

✓ Well, I'll just use my iPhone to search different apps and, you know, there's an app called the App Store and I can search for all the apps that I want on this app.

App Store前需要加定冠词the；search后应加介词for；all of apps应改为all the apps；wanted应改为want以符合时态；apps应保持单数形式app。

× And I can also read other posts which recommend some useful apps for our daily use. And it's quite.

✓ And I can also read other posts which recommend some useful apps for our daily use. And it's quite helpful.

原句末尾不完整，缺少形容词或补充说明，导致句子不完整。

× Well, recently I discovered quite a useful app called Shambe Oral English and I find a lot of valuable teaching resources and oral videos which can help me, so I want to use that frequently in the future.

✓ Well, recently I discovered quite a useful app called Shambe Oral English, and I have found a lot of valuable teaching resources and oral videos which can help me, so I want to use it frequently in the future.

动词时态应保持一致，discovered后应用现在完成时have found；代词that指代app，改为it更自然。