App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语如“uh”，并且句子结构要清晰，避免重复。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明用途。

예시: I have recently used WeChat almost every day for communicating with my friends and family. Besides that, I also use another app mainly for entertainment purposes.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子较长且结构混乱。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I am usually interested in apps that contain pictures, words, and especially short videos like Red Nose and TikTok. They are convenient to browse and not only provide entertainment but also help us learn new skills.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用正确的语法结构。

예시: I usually discover new apps through my friends or recommendations from the App Store. For example, one of my friends shared OneNote with me, which is a perfect and useful app for taking notes.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议先明确表达想法，再补充原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: In the future, I would like to download game apps after my exams because that will be a good time for entertainment.

× I am interested in the app's contains pictures and words and especially short videos like Red Nose and TikTok because they are convenient to browse and can bring some entertainment also as well as we can learn some skills.

✓ I am interested in apps that contain pictures and words and especially short videos like Red Nose and TikTok because they are convenient to browse and can bring some entertainment as well as help us learn some skills.

这里的'app's contains'错误地使用了单数所有格和动词单数形式，实际上应使用复数'apps'和动词复数形式'contain'。此外，'also as well as'重复表达，应简化为'as well as'。建议将'app's contains'改为'apps that contain'，使主谓一致。

× I will find out different apps through my friends or just a simple recommendation from the App Store.

✓ I will find different apps through my friends or just simple recommendations from the App Store.

动词'find out'通常用于发现事实或信息，这里应使用'find'表示找到应用程序。'a simple recommendation'应改为复数'simple recommendations'以匹配上下文。

× For example, my friend one of my friends share me with OneNote which is perfect and useful app to taking notes and but.

✓ For example, one of my friends shared OneNote with me, which is a perfect and useful app for taking notes.

'share me with'用法错误，正确表达应为'shared OneNote with me'。'share'应使用过去式'shared'，'app to taking notes'应改为'app for taking notes'。句子结构混乱，需调整顺序使其通顺。

× For example, my friend one of my friends share me with OneNote which is perfect and useful app to taking notes and but.

✓ For example, one of my friends shared OneNote with me, which is a perfect and useful app for taking notes.

描述过去发生的动作时，动词应使用过去式，'share'应改为'shared'。

× I would like to download the game apps after the after exam of the out, so this is the time for entertainment.

✓ I would like to download game apps after the exam, so that will be the time for entertainment.

表达将来意愿时，'would like to'后面动词原形正确，但句子中'after the after exam of the out'表达混乱，应简化为'after the exam'。此外，'so this is the time for entertainment'应改为' so that will be the time for entertainment'以符合将来时态。