App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和介词使用不当，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态的一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Recently, I have been using TikTok to watch funny videos for entertainment, and WeChat to keep in touch with my friends and see their updates.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容组织混乱。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I used to prefer apps that make me happy, like TikTok. However, now I prefer apps that provide knowledge, such as Blibbly, which has many educational videos about topics like how to play instruments.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，同时丰富细节，使表达更具体。

예시: Most of the time, I discover new apps through a vlogger named Jake. He often recommends useful applications, like a photo editing app called Daju and the social media platform QQ, which I find very helpful.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，清晰说明理由，并避免重复。

예시: In the future, I plan to use only essential social media apps like WeChat because I believe entertainment apps can be draining and make me feel exhausted.

× Recently I use a Tiktok and WeChat.

✓ Recently I use TikTok and WeChat.

“a Tiktok”中“Tiktok”是应用名称，不需要冠词“a”，且拼写应为“TikTok”。

× Recently I use a Tiktok and WeChat.

✓ Recently I have used TikTok and WeChat.

“Recently”表示最近发生的动作，应该用现在完成时“have used”而不是一般现在时“use”。

× I use WeChat to contact with my friends and see their movement.

✓ I use WeChat to contact my friends and see their updates.

动词“contact”后不需要介词“with”，且“movement”用词不当，应改为“updates”表示动态。

× In the past I'd prefer some applications which can make me happy such as the Tiktok, but now I prefer some applications which can I mean no more knowledge such as blibbly it including a lot of knowledge videos such as how to place instruments.

✓ In the past, I preferred some applications which could make me happy such as TikTok, but now I prefer some applications which provide more knowledge such as Blibbly; it includes a lot of educational videos such as how to play instruments.

“I'd prefer”应为过去时“I preferred”；“can”应改为过去时“could”；“can I mean no more knowledge”表达不清，改为“which provide more knowledge”；“including”应改为“includes”；“how to place instruments”应为“how to play instruments”。

× At most of the time I find different applications from a vlogger named Jake.

✓ Most of the time, I find different applications from a vlogger named Jake.

“At most of the time”表达错误，应为“Most of the time”。

× He always recommend many applications for me such as a photo application, Daju and the social media QQ.

✓ He always recommends many applications to me such as a photo application, Daju, and the social media QQ.

主语是第三人称单数“He”，动词应加-s变为“recommends”；“recommend for me”应改为“recommends to me”。

× He always recommend many applications for me such as a photo application, Daju and the social media QQ.

✓ He always recommends many applications to me such as a photo application, Daju, and the social media QQ.

“applications”复数正确，但“a photo application”前应加逗号分隔，且“recommend”应为“recommends”。

× In the future, I will just use the essential social media such as WeChat because I think some entertainment social media can spend my energy which make me exhausted.

✓ In the future, I will just use essential social media such as WeChat because I think some entertainment social media can drain my energy and make me exhausted.

“can spend my energy”表达不准确，应改为“can drain my energy”；“which make me exhausted”应改为“and make me exhausted”连接两个动作。