App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中时态使用不够准确，且句子结构较为简单，建议注意时态一致性，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Recently, I have been using an app called Outspeaking. It helps me practice my English speaking skills, and I find it very useful for improving my pronunciation and fluency.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议加强语法练习，避免重复词汇，并且提供完整具体的细节。

예시: I usually enjoy using apps that provide news and help me learn new study skills. For example, an app called Writebook allows me to learn more about the world and gain deeper knowledge.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但句子较长且重复，建议使用连接词优化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I usually find out about different apps through my friends. Since they know various types of apps, they recommend the ones they find useful, which helps me discover new apps easily.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，提供具体细节并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that provide information about studying and entertainment. For example, an app called Small Red Book collects people's experiences worldwide, which I find very interesting and helpful.

× Recently I use an app called Outspeaking.

✓ Recently I have used an app called Outspeaking.

这里的时间状语'recently'表示最近发生的动作，应该用现在完成时，表示动作对现在有影响或相关性，而不是一般现在时。

× I found it is useful for me to improve my pronunciation and speaking skills.

✓ I find it useful for me to improve my pronunciation and speaking skills.

句子描述的是现在的感受，应该用一般现在时'find'，而不是过去时'found'。

× I really like to using some apps which which can let me access the news and also some studying skills.

✓ I really like using some apps which can let me access the news and also some study skills.

动词like后面接动名词形式，不能用不定式'to using'。另外，'studying skills'应改为'study skills'，因为这里需要名词短语。

× For example the apps called Writebook can know much about the world and gain a deeper.

✓ For example, an app called Writebook can help me know more about the world and gain deeper knowledge.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语的合理搭配，'can know much'不自然，应改为'can help me know more'，'gain a deeper'后面缺少宾语，补充为'deeper knowledge'。

× I assess the apps from my friends because my friends know various types of apps and if they think that type app is useful, they will recommend it to me.

✓ I learn about the apps from my friends because my friends know various types of apps and if they think that type of app is useful, they will recommend it to me.

'assess the apps from my friends'表达不准确，应该用'learn about the apps from my friends'表示通过朋友了解应用。'that type app'缺少介词，应该是'that type of app'。

× It's quite helpful for me to know different kinds of apps.

✓ It's quite helpful for me to learn about different kinds of apps.

'know different kinds of apps'表达不准确，应该用'learn about different kinds of apps'表示了解某事物。

× I would like to use some apps that can let me access information about studying or entertainment.

✓ I would like to use some apps that can let me access information about study or entertainment.

'information about studying'中'studying'应改为名词'study'，因为这里需要名词形式。

× For example, I used an app called Small Red Book.

✓ For example, I use an app called Small Red Book.

句子描述的是现在常用的应用，应该用一般现在时'use'，而不是过去时'used'。

× It gathers the experiences of the people in the world and I can much.

✓ It gathers the experiences of people around the world and I can learn a lot.

原句不完整，'I can much'缺少动词，应该补充为'I can learn a lot'，使句子完整通顺。