App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I have recently been using Bilibili because I am preparing for my examinations. It offers many videos that teach how to pass the exam, so I try to learn from them.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达兴趣，并使用正确的介词和词汇。

예시: I usually prefer apps that have articles or novels because I enjoy reading a lot. Reading makes me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词提高连贯性。

예시: Sometimes, I find new apps through advertisements. When I see an interesting ad video, I decide to download the app.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确表达想要的应用类型，避免口语化词汇，使用清晰的句子结构。

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that have multiple functions, such as delivering food and teaching cooking skills, because they are very convenient.

× there are a lot of videos teach us how to pass this exam

✓ there are a lot of videos teaching us how to pass this exam

这里需要使用动词的现在分词形式（-ing形式）来修饰名词videos，表示这些视频的内容是“教我们如何通过考试”。

× so I trying to get some experience from them

✓ so I am trying to get some experience from them

主语是第一人称单数I，动词try需要用现在进行时态，正确形式是am trying。缺少助动词am导致语法错误。

× I'm so addicted in the reading such as will make me feel enjoyable

✓ I'm so addicted to reading, which makes me feel enjoyable

短语中“addicted”后应接介词“to”，而不是“in”。另外，句子结构不完整，需用关系代词which引导定语从句，表达更清晰。

× I prefer the app that has some articles or the novels

✓ I prefer apps that have some articles or novels

这里指的是泛指的应用程序，应该用复数形式apps，且不需要定冠词the。

× It sometimes just can be shown on the ad as as a advertisement

✓ It sometimes just can be shown in the ad as an advertisement

短语中“shown”后应接介词“in”表示“在广告中”，且“a advertisement”应改为“an advertisement”，因为advertisement以元音音素开头。

× while looking at the advertisement videos I find the app is really interesting so I just download it

✓ While looking at the advertisement videos, I found the app really interesting, so I just downloaded it

句子中时态不一致，前半句为过去时态，后半句也应保持一致；另外，缺少逗号导致句子结构不清晰。

× I mean I maybe accept the app that can generate different functions

✓ I mean I might accept an app that can generate different functions

“maybe”是副词，不能直接修饰动词“accept”，应使用情态动词“might”表达可能性；“the app”应改为不定冠词“an app”，表示泛指。

× like it can not only deliver app but also it can teach me how to cook

✓ like it can not only deliver apps but also teach me how to cook

“deliver app”应为复数形式“deliver apps”；且“but also”后面不需要重复主语“it”，保持句子简洁。

× just there are so many apps with different functions and we need to download

✓ There are just so many apps with different functions that we need to download

句子连接不当，应使用关系代词“that”引导定语从句，表达“我们需要下载的许多不同功能的应用”。