App— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "with the which I can consider." To improve, focus on using correct sentence structures and avoid unnecessary phrases. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your response.

예시: I use social media apps like Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp every day. WhatsApp is my most used app because I live in Canada and use it to stay in touch with my family in India. I'm grateful for technology that helps me connect with them easily.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes, such as "the enough knowledge" and "I watched the videos I can." To improve, use clearer sentence structures and provide specific examples with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually prefer apps that provide useful information about daily life. For example, I use Instagram and TikTok to watch informative videos. Additionally, I have joined several groups related to politics and news to stay updated.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "recommend me" and "the best form of to give knowledge." To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: My husband always recommends the best apps that can help me improve my practical knowledge. He sends me links to download them from the App Store on my iPhone. Besides that, I also search for apps on Google because I believe it is a great source of information.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and unclear phrasing, such as "increase to the highest level" and "find the questions on the app." To improve, be more precise and concise, and avoid filler words like "uh."

예시: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me improve my practical and general knowledge. Since I feel my knowledge is limited, I want to use apps with quizzes and educational content to learn more effectively.

× I use social media apps such as Instagram, Snapchat and WhatsApp everyday.

✓ I use social media apps such as Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp every day.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace' or 'ordinary', but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' (meaning 'each day') is correct. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items (Oxford comma) for clarity.

× The most used app in my phone is the WhatsApp because I live in Canada and I use this app to talk with my family who are in India.

✓ The most used app on my phone is WhatsApp because I live in Canada and I use this app to talk with my family who are in India.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'the WhatsApp' is incorrect because app names generally do not take the definite article 'the' unless part of the official name. So, 'WhatsApp' without 'the' is correct.

× I want to thank the technology that has provided us with the good apps with the which I can consider.

✓ I want to thank the technology that has provided us with good apps which I can consider.

The phrase 'with the which' is incorrect and redundant. The correct relative pronoun here is 'which' without 'the' or 'with'. Also, 'the good apps' should be 'good apps' as the definite article is unnecessary here.

× I always prefer the apps from which I could get the enough knowledge about the daily lifestyle.

✓ I always prefer apps from which I can get enough knowledge about daily lifestyle.

The definite article 'the' before 'enough knowledge' is incorrect; 'enough' does not require 'the'. Also, 'the apps' is unnecessary; 'apps' is sufficient. 'Could' should be 'can' to match the present tense context.

× For instance, I use the Instagram and Tiktok app in which I watched the videos I can.

✓ For instance, I use Instagram and TikTok apps in which I watch videos I can.

'The Instagram and Tiktok app' is incorrect because it mixes singular and plural forms. It should be 'Instagram and TikTok apps' (plural). Also, 'watched' should be 'watch' to maintain present tense, and 'the videos I can' is awkward; better phrased as 'videos I can' or 'videos I am able to watch'.

× I have joined a various groups related to the politics, the news.

✓ I have joined various groups related to politics and news.

'A various groups' is incorrect; 'various' is a determiner that does not need 'a'. Also, 'the politics, the news' is incorrect; 'politics and news' without 'the' is appropriate here.

× My husband always recommend me the best apps that I can use and improve my practical knowledge.

✓ My husband always recommends me the best apps that I can use to improve my practical knowledge.

The verb 'recommend' should be in third person singular form 'recommends' to agree with the subject 'My husband'. Also, adding 'to' before 'improve' clarifies the purpose.

× He always gave me the apps links which I can download from the App Store on my iPhone.

✓ He always gives me the app links which I can download from the App Store on my iPhone.

The verb 'gave' is past tense, but 'always' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'gives' is correct. Also, 'apps links' should be 'app links' (singular 'app' as adjective).

× Apart from this, I also search the apps on Google because I believe the Google is the best form of to give knowledge.

✓ Apart from this, I also search for apps on Google because I believe Google is the best source to provide knowledge.

'Search the apps' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'search for apps'. Also, 'the Google' is incorrect; 'Google' as a proper noun does not take 'the'. 'Best form of to give knowledge' is awkward; 'best source to provide knowledge' is clearer.

× I would definitely like to use apps which can provide me with the practical knowledge and general knowledge skills.

✓ I would definitely like to use apps that can provide me with practical knowledge and general knowledge skills.

'Which' is acceptable but 'that' is more common in restrictive clauses. Also, 'the practical knowledge' and 'general knowledge skills' do not need 'the' here.

× I believe that my general knowledge is not at a high level, so I would like to increase to the highest level so that I can, uh, find the questions on the app which can help me to increase my knowledge.

✓ I believe that my general knowledge is not at a high level, so I would like to increase it to the highest level so that I can find questions on the app which can help me increase my knowledge.

The phrase 'increase to the highest level' needs an object 'it' to clarify what is being increased. Also, 'the questions' is unnecessary; 'questions' is sufficient. 'Help me to increase' can be simplified to 'help me increase'.