Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر رسمية وطبيعية في اللغة الإنجليزية، وتجنب استخدام عبارات مثل "Are you kidding?" لأنها غير مناسبة في سياق الاختبار. كما يجب أن توضح لماذا تحب الحفلات بدلاً من قول إنها جزء مفضل من اليوم فقط.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy parties because they give me a chance to meet new people and have fun with my friends.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً، واستخدم جمل كاملة وصحيحة نحويًا. كما يجب أن تستخدم روابط بين الأفكار لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا، وقدم تفاصيل محددة عن عدد الحفلات أو نوعها.

예시: I don't remember the exact number, but I attended many parties with my family when I was a child. We usually enjoyed dancing and spending quality time together, which helped strengthen our relationships.

제안: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر سلاسة وطبيعية، وتجنب التكرار مثل "I consider it. I consider it as a hobby". استخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع توضيح سبب استمتاعك بتنظيم الحفلات.

예시: Yes, I have organized many parties because I enjoy planning events and seeing my friends have a good time. It has become a hobby for me.

× Actually I don't remember how many I got to the party but I I got many times with my family and enjoyed dancing.

✓ Actually, I don't remember how many parties I went to, but I went many times with my family and enjoyed dancing.

The original sentence uses 'got to the party' which is incorrect; the correct verb is 'went to the party' for past events. Also, 'got many times' is incorrect; it should be 'went many times'. The verb tense should be past tense to match the time frame. Additionally, 'parties' should be plural to match 'how many'.

× Have have a great time with our family and relationship and friends.

✓ We had a great time with our family, relatives, and friends.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repetition ('Have have'). Also, 'relationship' is incorrectly used; the correct word is 'relatives' or 'family members'. The sentence needs a subject and verb to be complete. The past tense 'had' is appropriate here.

× Many times I organize the party, I consider it.

✓ Many times I have organized parties; I consider it a hobby.

The original sentence uses present tense 'organize' which is incorrect when referring to past experiences. The present perfect 'have organized' is appropriate. Also, 'the party' should be plural 'parties' to match 'many times'. The sentence structure is improved by separating ideas with a semicolon.

× I consider it as a hobby, OK, and I enjoy it when I do do it.

✓ I consider it a hobby, and I enjoy it when I do it.

The phrase 'consider it as a hobby' is incorrect; 'consider it a hobby' is correct. The repeated 'do do' is a typo and should be 'do'. The word 'OK' is unnecessary in formal speech. The sentence uses present tense correctly here.