Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了原因，但句子结构稍显复杂，且有语法错误（如"which make me"应为"which makes me"）。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I don't really like parties because they are often noisy and chaotic, which makes me feel uncomfortable. However, I do appreciate that parties provide a chance to meet new people and catch up with old friends.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如句子断裂和用词不当（"merely on special occasions like."句号位置错误，"work hard is more important"应为"working hard is more important"）。建议注意句子完整性，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并丰富细节。

예시: When I was a kid, I only had parties on special occasions like graduations and birthdays. In my culture, people focus more on working hard than enjoying life, so celebrations are not very frequent.

제안: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误（"I have all nine different events before"不明确且语法错误）。建议使用清晰准确的表达，避免模糊的词汇，同时注意时态和单复数形式。

예시: I have organized many different events before, but I have never organized a party. I think organizing a party would be challenging but memorable. If I organize one in the future, I will definitely invite my close friends and family.

× However, parties are often noisy and chaotic, which make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ However, parties are often noisy and chaotic, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

这里的关系代词which指代复数名词parties，但谓语动词应与先行词保持一致。由于which引导的定语从句修饰复数名词parties，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数makes，因为which作为主语时视为单数。

× When I was a kid I had parties merely on special occasions like. Graduation and birthday because in my culture we don't enjoy our life a lot.

✓ When I was a kid, I had parties merely on special occasions like graduation and birthdays because in my culture we don't enjoy our life a lot.

原句中like后面不应有句号，且Graduation和birthday应小写且复数形式birthdays更合适。句子缺少逗号，导致结构不清晰。

× We emphasize that work hard is more important.

✓ We emphasize that working hard is more important.

work hard是动词短语，作主语时应使用动名词形式working hard。

× I have all nine different events before, but I haven't organised a party yet.

✓ I have organized nine different events before, but I haven't organised a party yet.

all nine different events表达不自然，去掉all更符合英语习惯。

× If I organise a party in the future, I will definitely invite my close friend and family.

✓ If I organise a party in the future, I will definitely invite my close friends and family.

close friend应为复数形式close friends，因为通常邀请多位朋友。