Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法和表达错误，且信息不完整。建议回答时注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免断句和拼写错误。可以先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体细节支持。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my area because the government has invested in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure. These crosswalks are located at most major intersections, which helps ensure the safety of pedestrians.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且逻辑混乱。建议先明确表达观点，再用具体理由支持，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I would like to see a reduction in traffic congestion because it is very common during rush hours and causes inconvenience. Therefore, I think the government should implement more efficient public transportation systems to reduce the number of cars on the roads.

× The government in base 2IN pedestrian friendly infrastructure with crosswalks located in the.

✓ The government has invested in pedestrian-friendly infrastructure with crosswalks located in the area.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语动词并调整词序，使句子完整通顺。

× Not every major intersection.

✓ Not every major intersection has one.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语动词，使句子成为完整句子。

× I wouldn't like to see a reduction in traffic congestion in my area is very common, convenient for everybody to travel anywhere on during the rush over.

✓ I would like to see a reduction in traffic congestion in my area because it is very common, and it would be more convenient for everybody to travel anywhere during the rush hour.

原句中“wouldn't like”用法错误，表达愿望时应使用“would like”。此外，句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× So I think the government have to implement some nativists transportation systems and help reduce the number of cars on roads.

✓ So I think the government has to implement some native transportation systems and help reduce the number of cars on the roads.

主语“government”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。另外，“nativists”应为形容词“native”，并且“on roads”前应加定冠词“the”。