Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答缺乏完整的句子结构，表达不够清晰，且有重复词汇。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: There are not many crosswalks around my school because it is located far from the city center. Therefore, fewer people use crosswalks in this area.

제안: 你的回答语句不完整且难以理解，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体例子或原因支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I would like to improve the bus schedule in my area because currently, buses come every 15 minutes, which is not very convenient during peak hours.

× Crosswalks around my school because we are in the normal area so it has a long distance with the city center.

✓ There are crosswalks around my school because we are in a normal area, so it is far from the city center.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。应使用“There are”引出主语，补全句子结构。

× So there's not much not much people to go to the crossword.

✓ So there aren't many people who go to the crosswalk.

“people”是复数名词，前面应使用复数形式的谓语“aren't many”，而不是“there's not much”。

× From my perspective, I think there's there's still work past that we could take the bus station schedule was with me.

✓ From my perspective, I think there is still work to be done regarding the bus station schedule.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯的表达，应简化并调整句子结构，使其表达清晰。

× Purchase means there has one bus between 15 minutes.

✓ This means there is one bus every 15 minutes.

“between 15 minutes”用法错误，应使用“every 15 minutes”表示时间间隔。

× So it's really in.

✓ So it's really convenient.

“in”用法不当，应使用形容词“convenient”来描述交通状况。