Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around where I live. I live in a big city. The city is very busy.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
Yes, I would like to see improvements in the traffic management in my area. Because the traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during. Peak hours.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体信息，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because I live in a bustling city. These crosswalks help pedestrians cross busy streets safely, especially during rush hours.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，建议避免句子碎片，使用连接词使句子完整且逻辑清晰。
예시: Yes, I would like to see better traffic management in my area because traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during peak hours when many people commute to work.
문법
× Because the traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during. Peak hours.
✓ Because the traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during peak hours.
句子中“during.”后面不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将句号去掉，使句子连贯完整。
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