Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复（"Yes, yes"），建议避免重复用词，使表达更自然。回答时应直接回应问题，先给出主题句，然后用连词连接具体细节，内容应更具体。例如，说明为什么觉得安全方便，以及为什么对盲人来说有时不必要。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my neighborhood, which makes it safe and convenient for pedestrians to cross the streets. However, sometimes these crosswalks are not very helpful for blind people because they lack audio signals.

제안: 回答时应先直接回答问题，然后用连词补充细节。表达中有语法和用词错误，如“2 less train or bus”不准确，建议改为“fewer trains and buses”。内容应更具体，说明为什么需要改善公共交通系统。

예시: Yes, I would like the government to improve the public transportation system because there are fewer trains and buses than needed, which causes long waiting times and inconvenience for commuters.

× I go outside and I can see many crosswalks near my neighborhood

✓ I go outside and I can see many crosswalks in my neighborhood

The preposition 'near' is incorrect here because 'neighborhood' refers to the area where the speaker lives. The correct preposition is 'in' to indicate that the crosswalks are located within the neighborhood.

× And sometimes they are very unnecessary for the blind people.

✓ And sometimes they are very unnecessary for blind people.

The definite article 'the' before 'blind people' is unnecessary when referring to people in general. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× I think there are 2 less train or bus in the city

✓ I think there are 2 fewer trains or buses in the city

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'fewer' is used with countable nouns like 'trains' and 'buses'. Also, the nouns should be plural to match the quantifier '2'.