Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are so many crosswalk around my house and there are so many people and the traffic is crowded. It's because my house is near Tokyo station. It is center of Japan so there are so many sites. Tourist and workers aren't here.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
Actually I have no problems about the traffic near my house. Since the area is center of Tokyo, the road and traffic is very structured and good.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（例えば、"crosswalk"は複数形で"crosswalks"が正しい）や不自然な表現（"Tourist and workers aren't here"は意味が不明瞭）があります。また、内容がやや混乱しており、具体的な詳細が不足しています。より明確で自然な英語表現を使い、論理的に話を展開することが必要です。
예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my house because it is near Tokyo Station, which is a busy area. As a result, there are lots of people and heavy traffic. This makes the area quite crowded, especially during rush hours.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答は明確で簡潔ですが、より自然で流暢な表現を使うことができます。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って論理的に説明すると良いでしょう。具体的な例や詳細を加えることで、内容が豊かになります。
예시: Actually, I don't have any problems with the traffic near my house because the area is in the center of Tokyo, where the roads are well-planned and traffic is well-managed. For example, there are clear signs and traffic lights that help keep everything running smoothly.
문법
× Yes, there are so many crosswalk around my house and there are so many people and the traffic is crowded.
✓ Yes, there are so many crosswalks around my house and there are so many people and the traffic is crowded.
The word 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because 'so many' indicates a plural noun is needed.
× Tourist and workers aren't here.
✓ Tourists and workers aren't here.
Both 'Tourist' and 'workers' should be plural to match the context; 'Tourist' should be 'Tourists'.
× Since the area is center of Tokyo, the road and traffic is very structured and good.
✓ Since the area is the center of Tokyo, the roads and traffic are very structured and good.
'Center' needs the definite article 'the' and 'road' should be plural 'roads' to match 'traffic' which is plural in meaning; also, 'road and traffic is' should be 'roads and traffic are' for subject-verb agreement.
× Since the area is center of Tokyo, the road and traffic is very structured and good.
✓ Since the area is the center of Tokyo, the roads and traffic are very structured and good.
The phrase 'center of Tokyo' requires the definite article 'the' before 'center'.
× the road and traffic is very structured and good.
✓ the roads and traffic are very structured and good.
The compound subject 'roads and traffic' requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is'.
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