Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood. At each intersection, you can find four crosswalks, one in each direction. When the traffic light turns green, pedestrians can safely cross the road.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明原因。

예시: If I were asked, I would say that there are too many private cars on the road. Although people prefer having their own cars for convenience, this causes heavy traffic congestion, which is quite problematic.

× Yes, in each of the road you can see there are 4 crosswalks in the four different directions.

✓ Yes, on each of the roads you can see there are 4 crosswalks in the four different directions.

这里“each of the road”中的“road”应该用复数形式“roads”，因为“each of”后面跟的是复数名词。

× If the light is green you can go, but if the right light.

✓ If the light is green, you can go, but if the light is red, you must stop.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和完整的条件句，导致句子不通顺。需要补充完整的条件句和谓语动词。

× If you are asked I would like to say there are too many private cars in the on the road.

✓ If you ask me, I would like to say there are too many private cars on the road.

“in the on the road”中“in”和“on”重复且用法错误，应去掉“in the”，只用“on the road”。另外，“If you are asked”表达不自然，改为“If you ask me”更符合口语习惯。

× People would like to have their own car for convenience, but this made the traffic is so bad I don't think it is a good thing.

✓ People would like to have their own car for convenience, but this has made the traffic so bad that I don't think it is a good thing.

原句中“made the traffic is so bad”结构错误，动词“made”后不应直接跟“is”，应改为“has made the traffic so bad that...”使句子结构完整且语义清晰。