Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答に多くの「あのー」や「えーと」が含まれており、流暢さが低下しています。また、「course works」は誤った表現で、「crosswalks」が正しいです。文法的な誤りもあり、内容がやや曖昧です。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: No, there are only two or three crosswalks near my home, so I think they are quite few. Crosswalks can be dangerous, especially for children, because drivers sometimes don't pay enough attention, which makes crossing stressful for them.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りが多いです。「roadster」や「near my phone」は意味が通じません。具体的にどのような交通の問題を変えたいのかを明確にし、理由や状況を詳しく説明することが必要です。

예시: Yes, I would like to improve the safety of the roads near my home. Every morning, many children use the crosswalks, but the roads are wide and busy, which makes it dangerous. Adding more traffic lights or speed bumps could help prevent accidents.

× there are two or three of course works near my home

✓ there are two or three crosswalks near my home

The word 'course works' is incorrect and should be 'crosswalks' to correctly refer to pedestrian crossings. This is a plural noun issue where the wrong word form was used.

× I think it is, uh, not so many

✓ I think there are not so many

The phrase 'it is not so many' is incorrect because 'many' refers to plural countable nouns and requires a plural verb form. The correct form is 'there are not so many' to agree with the plural subject.

× crosswalks is a very dangerous area

✓ crosswalks are very dangerous areas

'Crosswalks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'area' should be plural to match 'crosswalks'. This is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural noun issue.

× It makes them feel much more anxiety about

✓ It makes them feel much more anxious

The phrase 'feel anxiety about' is awkward here. 'Anxiety' is a noun, but the verb 'feel' is better followed by the adjective 'anxious'. Also, 'about' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× wide and a big roadster isn't necessarily near my phone

✓ a wide and big road isn't necessarily near my home

'Roadster' is incorrect; the intended word is 'road'. Also, 'phone' should be 'home'. The article 'a' should precede the adjectives and noun correctly. This is an adjective and noun usage error.

× Every morning a lot of children walk across the crosswalk

✓ Every morning a lot of children walk across the crosswalks

Since 'a lot of children' is plural, the plural noun 'crosswalks' should be used to indicate multiple crossings. This is a singular/plural noun agreement issue.

× it is very dangerous to encountering some accidents

✓ it is very dangerous and may lead to some accidents

The phrase 'dangerous to encountering' is grammatically incorrect. 'Dangerous' should be followed by 'and may lead to' or similar structure. 'Encountering' is a gerund and does not fit here. This is a preposition and verb form misuse.