Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“crosswords”应为“crosswalks”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用正确的词汇。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because I live downtown. The area is busy with many commercial buildings, so lots of people use the crosswalks to cross the streets safely.

제안: 回答内容较为具体且结构清晰，但可以增加更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富词汇以提升表达效果。

예시: Yes, the traffic in my area is often very congested during rush hour. For instance, buses and taxis get stuck in long queues, which causes significant delays. Therefore, I believe the government should consider widening the roads to improve the situation.

× there are many commercial buildings near my home, attracting a lot of young people come here and find work opportunities

✓ there are many commercial buildings near my home, attracting a lot of young people to come here and find work opportunities

动词 attract 后面接动词时，应使用不定式 to do 而不是直接接动词原形。此处应为 'attracting a lot of young people to come'，表示吸引年轻人来此。

× so there are many crosswords to ensure that people can cross the cross

✓ so there are many crosswalks to ensure that people can cross the road

单词 'crosswords' 是拼字游戏的意思，错误使用。应使用 'crosswalks' 表示人行横道，且 'cross the cross' 语义不通，应改为 'cross the road'。

× causing significant delay and congestion

✓ causing significant delays and congestion

名词 'delay' 在此处应使用复数形式 'delays'，因为表示多次或多种延误。

× there are many crosswords to ensure that people can cross the cross

✓ there are many crosswalks to ensure that people can cross the road

'crosswords' 是拼字游戏，错误使用，应为 'crosswalks' 表示人行横道。

× I live in the downtown of my city

✓ I live in the downtown area of my city

'downtown' 通常不直接加 'of'，应加 'area' 形成 'downtown area'，表示市中心区域。