Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are several crosswalks near my house, which makes it safer for people to cross the street. I usually ride my bike to school, but sometimes I have to wait a long time at the crosswalks because of heavy traffic.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
There is a street near my house that doesn't have a sidewalk because it is only meant for vehicles. I think this is a problem because pedestrians have to walk on the road, which often causes traffic jams and makes it unsafe for everyone.
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총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
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예시: Yes, there are several crosswalks near my house, which makes it safer for pedestrians. However, I usually ride my bike to school, and sometimes I have to wait a long time at these crosswalks because of heavy traffic, which can be quite frustrating.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
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예시: Yes, there is a street near my house without a sidewalk since it is designed only for vehicles. As a result, pedestrians have to walk on the road, which not only causes traffic jams but also makes it unsafe for everyone, especially during peak hours.
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