Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my neighborhood because I live quite like a center of a rural town, so it's a little bit crowded and there's some traffic.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
Yes, there are two things I want to change about traffic in my neighborhood. One is the the road is quite narrow so it causes conjunctions during the peak hours, and the second is the traffic light in the late night is not working, it's just only shining.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免冗余，并注意语法准确性。
예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood because I live near the center of a small town, which is quite busy with traffic.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: Yes, I would like to change two things about the traffic. Firstly, the roads are quite narrow, which causes congestion during peak hours. Secondly, the traffic lights do not function properly late at night; they only flash instead of working normally.
문법
× there's some traffic
✓ there's some traffic
此处 'traffic' 是不可数名词，使用单数形式 'there's' 是正确的，无需修改。
× I live quite like a center of a rural town
✓ I live quite near the center of a rural town
介词 'like' 用于表示相似，而此处应表达位置关系，正确用法是 'near' 表示靠近。
× it causes conjunctions during the peak hours
✓ it causes congestion during the peak hours
单词 'conjunctions' 意为连接词，错误使用，应为 'congestion' 表示交通拥堵。
× it's just only shining
✓ it's just shining
'just' 和 'only' 都表示限定，连用显得冗余且不自然，应去掉其中一个。
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