Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific supporting details. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. For example, say "The area where I live doesn't have many crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and large gardens."

예시: No, there aren't many crosswalks around where I live. This is because the area is mainly occupied by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and large gardens, which do not have designated pedestrian crossings.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and use correct expressions like 'wider roads' instead of 'more wider'. For example, you can say, "Yes, traffic congestion is a big problem here. I think the government should widen the roads to reduce traffic, and people should use public transport more often."

예시: Yes, traffic congestion is a major issue in my area. Therefore, I believe the government should widen the roads to ease the flow of vehicles. Additionally, encouraging people to use public transportation could help reduce traffic jams.

× The place where I live is a is a City side which don't have much crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings and supermarkets and also big gardens which does not provide crosswalks and.

✓ The place where I live is a city side which doesn't have many crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and also big gardens which do not provide crosswalks.

The error is in the use of 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' for the singular subject 'city side' and the incorrect plural form 'much crosswalks' instead of 'many crosswalks'. 'City side' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't'. 'Crosswalks' is countable plural, so 'many' is used instead of 'much'. Also, 'does not' is used for plural 'gardens'. Suggestions: Use 'doesn't' with singular subjects and 'many' with countable plural nouns.

× The place where I live is a is a City side which don't have much crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings and supermarkets and also big gardens which does not provide crosswalks and.

✓ The place where I live is a city side which doesn't have many crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and also big gardens which do not provide crosswalks.

The phrase 'which don't have' is incorrect because 'which' refers to 'city side', a singular noun, so the verb should be 'doesn't have'. The third person singular subject requires the verb form with 's' or 'es'. Suggestions: Match the verb form to the singular subject by using 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'.

× The place where I live is a is a City side which don't have much crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings and supermarkets and also big gardens which does not provide crosswalks and.

✓ The place where I live is a city side which doesn't have many crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and also big gardens which do not provide crosswalks.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'crosswalks' is a countable plural noun. Therefore, 'many' should be used instead of 'much'. Suggestions: Use 'many' with countable plural nouns and 'much' with uncountable nouns.

× The place where I live is a is a City side which don't have much crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings and supermarkets and also big gardens which does not provide crosswalks and.

✓ The place where I live is a city side which doesn't have many crosswalks because it is mostly surrounded by commercial buildings, supermarkets, and also big gardens which do not provide crosswalks.

The sentence ends with 'and' which is incorrect as it leaves the sentence incomplete. The conjunction 'and' should connect two clauses or items, but here it is unnecessary at the end. Suggestions: Remove the trailing 'and' to complete the sentence properly.

× Of course, as it's the biggest challenge for us to reach the our workplace on time due to traffic, so I think the government should take an issue to make the roads more wider so that the traffic can be reduced and also people should use.

✓ Of course, as it's the biggest challenge for us to reach our workplace on time due to traffic, so I think the government should take an issue to make the roads wider so that the traffic can be reduced and also people should use public transport.

The phrase 'the our workplace' is incorrect because 'our' is a possessive pronoun and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'more wider' is incorrect because 'wider' already implies comparison; 'more' is redundant. The sentence ends abruptly with 'people should use' which is incomplete; adding 'public transport' completes the thought. Suggestions: Remove 'the' before 'our', avoid redundant comparatives like 'more wider', and complete sentences fully.