Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'pressure' thay vì 'crosswalks', 'crossword' thay vì 'crosswalks'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: No, there are not many crosswalks around where I live. In the past, there were more because people walked to work, but now most people use cars or buses, so fewer crosswalks are needed.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp còn sai, ví dụ như 'traffic lights I want to be' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I would like to have more traffic lights in my area because they can make the streets safer. For example, many accidents happen at busy intersections without traffic lights.

× Well, actually I don't think there's a lot of pressure around the place where I live.

✓ Well, actually I don't think there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'pressure' instead of 'crosswalks', which is the intended subject. Also, 'there's' is singular, but 'a lot of crosswalks' is plural, so 'there are' should be used to agree in number.

× For example, in the past there used to have a lot of crossword because people wanted to work, but now they're all busier and they don't have enough time, so they enjoy using Pop.

✓ For example, in the past there used to be a lot of crosswalks because people wanted to walk, but now they're all busier and they don't have enough time, so they enjoy using apps.

The phrase 'used to have' is incorrect; it should be 'used to be' to indicate existence in the past. 'Crossword' should be plural 'crosswalks' to match the context. 'People wanted to work' is likely a typo for 'wanted to walk'. 'Pop' is unclear and likely a typo for 'apps' or similar.

× Well, to be honest, I have a lot of things that I want to change about the traffic in my area, especially the traffic lights I want to be.

✓ Well, to be honest, I have a lot of things that I want to change about the traffic in my area, especially the traffic lights I want to have.

The phrase 'traffic lights I want to be' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'traffic lights I want to have' to express desire to possess or install more traffic lights.

× I want to have more traffic light where I live because it can have the street more safe.

✓ I want to have more traffic lights where I live because they can make the street safer.

'Traffic light' should be plural 'traffic lights' to indicate more than one. 'It can have the street more safe' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they can make the street safer' to express causation and comparative adjective.