Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my home, mostly used for reducing traffic congestion and making it easier for pedestrians to walk across.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
Yes, definitely. The parking lot around my secondary school is very small, so parents often park their car around the crosswalks which makes it harder for the pedestrians to walk across in rush hours.
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총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答比较自然，但内容稍显笼统。建议直接回答问题后，补充更具体的细节，比如描述你家附近的具体情况或举例说明这些人行横道如何帮助行人。
예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home, especially at busy intersections. For example, the crosswalk in front of the supermarket has traffic lights that help pedestrians cross safely during rush hours.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
점수: 80.0제안: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富词汇。建议在回答中加入原因和影响的描述，使内容更完整。
예시: Yes, definitely. Because the parking lot near my secondary school is very small, parents often park their cars around the crosswalks. As a result, it becomes difficult for pedestrians to cross safely during rush hours, which increases the risk of accidents.
문법
× parents often park their car around the crosswalks which makes it harder for the pedestrians to walk across in rush hours.
✓ parents often park their cars around the crosswalks which makes it harder for the pedestrians to walk across in rush hours.
The word 'car' should be plural 'cars' because 'parents' is plural, so the possessive pronoun 'their' refers to multiple people each with their own car. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
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