Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why crosswalks are important for both pedestrians and drivers, using specific details.

예시: Yes, there are several crosswalks in my area, which are very helpful for pedestrians to cross safely. Moreover, they also assist drivers by clearly indicating where to watch for people crossing, enhancing overall road safety.

제안: Focus on improving sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about what changes you want and why, and avoid grammatical errors. For example, clearly state that you want more traffic signals at crosswalks to improve safety, especially at night.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more traffic signals installed at crosswalks because they improve safety for pedestrians, especially during nighttime when visibility is low. If the government adds more signals, it would greatly reduce accidents in my area.

× Yes, where I live there are some number of crosswalks because it's the very helpful for the pedestrian when they need to cross the road and it is also safe for the passengers.

✓ Yes, where I live there are some crosswalks because they are very helpful for pedestrians when they need to cross the road and it is also safe for passengers.

The phrase 'some number of crosswalks' is incorrect; 'some crosswalks' is the proper quantifier. Also, 'the very helpful' should be 'very helpful' without 'the' because 'helpful' is an adjective describing a general quality. 'The pedestrian' should be plural 'pedestrians' to refer generally to people crossing the road. 'The passengers' should be 'passengers' without 'the' to refer generally.

× Yes, where I live there are some number of crosswalks because it's the very helpful for the pedestrian when they need to cross the road and it is also safe for the passengers.

✓ Yes, where I live there are some crosswalks because they are very helpful for pedestrians when they need to cross the road and it is also safe for passengers.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to plural 'crosswalks'; 'they' should be used instead to agree in number with 'crosswalks'. Also, 'the pedestrian' should be plural 'pedestrians' to match 'they'.

× Especially for the driver, they can easily check the pedestrian and crosswalk.

✓ Especially for drivers, they can easily see pedestrians and crosswalks.

'The driver' is singular but followed by 'they', which is plural; it should be plural 'drivers' to match 'they'. Also, 'check the pedestrian and crosswalk' is awkward; 'see pedestrians and crosswalks' is more natural and correct.

× Yes there is the few signal for the crosswalk.

✓ Yes, there are a few signals for the crosswalks.

'The few' is incorrect here; 'a few' is the correct quantifier for countable plural nouns. Also, 'signal' should be plural 'signals' to match 'a few'. 'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'signals'. 'Crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' to match 'signals'.

× I want to be add more because it's provide the safety and they also feel lights on the road.

✓ I want to add more because they provide safety and also have lights on the road.

'Want to be add' is incorrect; the correct form is 'want to add'. 'It's provide' is incorrect; it should be 'they provide' to agree with plural 'signals'. 'They also feel lights' is incorrect; 'they also have lights' is correct to express that signals have lights.

× If government apply more on the road, it will be helpful safety or during the night time.

✓ If the government applies more on the road, it will help with safety, especially during the night time.

'Government' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Apply more on the road' is awkward; 'applies more' is better. 'Helpful safety or during the night time' is incorrect; 'help with safety, especially during the night time' is clearer and grammatically correct.