Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
수험생
Yes, there are a lot of crossroads around my place because we have many First Streets, so. To save many pedestrians, we have many crossroads.
시험관
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
수험생
No, I don't want to change about the traffic in my area because I don't know well geographic. So I don't know how how to comprise this traffic laws and systems. So I don't know that.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
점수: 55.0제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고, 'crossroads'와 'crosswalks'의 혼동이 있습니다. 또한 문장이 명확하지 않고, 불필요한 반복과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 간결하게, 그리고 정확한 단어를 사용하여 답변을 구성하세요.
예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because the area has several busy streets. These crosswalks help pedestrians cross safely.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
점수: 40.0제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많으며, 내용이 구체적이지 않습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드세요.
예시: No, I wouldn't want to change the traffic system because I am not familiar with the area's geography or traffic regulations, so I don't feel qualified to suggest any changes.
문법
× Yes, there are a lot of crossroads around my place because we have many First Streets, so.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks around my place because we have many First Streets.
The student used 'crossroads' instead of 'crosswalks'. 'Crossroads' means an intersection of two roads, which is different from 'crosswalks' (pedestrian crossings). The question asks about crosswalks, so the plural noun should be 'crosswalks' to match the context.
× No, I don't want to change about the traffic in my area because I don't know well geographic.
✓ No, I don't want to change the traffic in my area because I don't know geography well.
The phrase 'change about the traffic' is incorrect; 'change' does not require 'about' here. Also, 'geographic' is an adjective and used incorrectly; the noun 'geography' should be used. The adverb 'well' should come after the verb phrase 'know geography'.
× So I don't know how how to comprise this traffic laws and systems.
✓ So I don't know how to comply with these traffic laws and systems.
The phrase 'how how to comprise this traffic laws and systems' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Comprise' is incorrectly used; the intended meaning is likely 'comply with' or 'understand'. Also, 'this traffic laws' should be 'these traffic laws' to match plural noun. The repeated 'how' is a mistake.
× So I don't know that.
✓ So I don't know that.
This sentence is grammatically correct but vague. No correction needed based on the provided grammar problem types.
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