Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“crossing”应为复数形式“crossings”，且“people working”表达不准确，应为“people walking”。建议注意名词单复数和词汇搭配的准确性，同时可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are quite a few pedestrian crossings near my home, especially around schools and busy intersections. These crossings significantly improve safety for people walking, which is very important in my neighborhood because the traffic can be quite heavy during rush hours.

제안: 回答未完整表达观点，最后一句不完整且缺少具体细节。建议补充完整句子，使用连接词丰富内容，并具体说明为何公共交通能改善交通状况。

예시: I would definitely like to see improvements in the traffic situation in my area. Currently, there are frequent traffic jams during peak hours, which cause significant delays and frustration for commuters like me. Therefore, I think introducing better public transportation options, such as more frequent buses and expanded subway lines, can greatly reduce traffic congestion and make commuting easier.

× These crossing significantly improve safety for people working, which is very important in my neighborhood because the traffic can be quite heavy during rush hours.

✓ These crossings significantly improve safety for people walking, which is very important in my neighborhood because the traffic can be quite heavy during rush hours.

原句中使用了“people working”，但根据上下文，应该是指“行人”，即“people walking”。这里“working”用错了动名词形式，正确的应该是“walking”，表示“走路的人”。

× I think introducing better public transportation options can be more.

✓ I think introducing better public transportation options can help more.

原句“I think introducing better public transportation options can be more.”结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句意不明确。应补充动词“help”使句子完整，表达“可以更有帮助”的意思。