Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live, especially at all the major intersections. They make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the streets, which is very important in busy areas.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and completeness. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details. Also, complete your thoughts to make your answer more effective.

예시: I would like to see less traffic congestion in my area because it gets really bad during rush hours. As a result, it takes a long time to get anywhere. I think improving public transportation would help reduce the number of cars on the road.

× Yes, there are many crosswalks around the where I live they are at all big intersection.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live; they are at all big intersections.

The phrase 'around the where I live' is incorrect because 'the' is unnecessary before 'where'. Also, 'intersection' should be plural 'intersections' to match 'all'. The sentence is corrected by removing 'the' and making 'intersection' plural to agree with 'all'.

× There are major safer for people across around there and they are.

✓ They are majorly safer for people crossing around there.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Major safer' is incorrect; 'majorly safer' or 'much safer' is appropriate. 'Across around there' is confusing; 'crossing around there' clarifies the meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would like to see less traffic congestion in my area. It's really bad during rush hours and it takes a long time to get anywhere and I think having public transportation.

✓ I would like to see less traffic congestion in my area. It's really bad during rush hours and it takes a long time to get anywhere. I think having better public transportation would help.

The original sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. The phrase 'I think having public transportation' lacks a verb and object to complete the thought. Adding 'better' and 'would help' completes the sentence and clarifies the intended meaning.