Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如冠词使用不当（a lot of crosswalk 应为 a lot of crosswalks），句子结构不够自然。建议注意名词复数形式和动词搭配，回答时尽量简洁且连贯。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my city, Chongqing. Because the terrain is quite complex, having crosswalks is essential for pedestrian safety.

제안: 回答内容较为直接，但缺少连接词使句子显得有些生硬。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来使表达更流畅，同时可以提供更多具体细节。

예시: Yes, traffic jams are a serious problem in Chongqing, especially during rush hour. Therefore, I hope the government can widen the roads to ease the congestion.

× There are a lot of crosswalk around my city and I live in Chongqing.

✓ There are a lot of crosswalks around my city and I live in Chongqing.

crosswalk是可数名词，表示“人行横道”，复数形式应为crosswalks。句中使用了a lot of，后面应接复数名词，故应改为crosswalks。

× You know, the terrain of the Chongqing is very complex, so build the crosswalks is very necessary.

✓ You know, the terrain of Chongqing is very complex, so building crosswalks is very necessary.

句子中'the Chongqing'中的定冠词'the'不应出现，地名前一般不加定冠词。'build the crosswalks is very necessary'结构不正确，主语应为动名词短语'building crosswalks'，表示“建造人行横道是很有必要的”。此外，crosswalks前不需要定冠词'the'，因为泛指。

× I hope the government can widen the road to relieve this situation.

✓ I hope the government will widen the road to relieve this situation.

表达希望时，常用'hope + 主语 + will + 动词原形'结构，表示对未来的期望。'can'表示能力或许可，不太符合此处语境。故应改为'will'。