Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更直接回应问题，避免重复表达“拥挤”的意思。可以先明确回答有很多斑马线，然后用具体细节支持，比如斑马线的位置或数量。语法和用词需注意，如“there always have”应为“there is always”。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live in Guangzhou. They are usually located at busy intersections to help pedestrians cross safely, which is important because the city is very crowded.

제안: 回答时应先直接回答问题，然后用连词连接具体建议。注意语法，如“if there are more public transportation”应为“if there were more public transportation options”。建议提供更具体的例子和原因，使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more public transportation options, such as additional bus routes and subway lines. This would make commuting more convenient and help reduce traffic jams in my city.

× There's a lot of pedestrian walking along the street and there always have traffic congestion on the road so it's a crowded city.

✓ There are a lot of pedestrians walking along the street and there is always traffic congestion on the road, so it's a crowded city.

这里的 'pedestrian' 应该用复数形式 'pedestrians'，因为表示很多行人。'There's' 是 'there is' 的缩写，后面接复数名词时应使用 'there are'。此外，'there always have traffic congestion' 中 'have' 应改为单数形式 'has'，但更自然的表达是 'there is always traffic congestion'。

× if there are more public transportation like bus, subway or any other vehicle we can share, I think would be much more convenient and it will help to solve the traffic jam in my city.

✓ if there is more public transportation like buses, subways or any other vehicles we can share, I think it would be much more convenient and it will help to solve the traffic jam in my city.

'public transportation' 是不可数名词，前面用 'more' 时应搭配单数动词 'is'。'bus' 和 'subway' 应用复数形式 'buses' 和 'subways'，因为表示多种交通工具。'any other vehicle' 也应改为复数 'any other vehicles'。此外，'I think would be' 缺少主语，应为 'I think it would be'。