Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Вашу відповідь слід зробити більш природною та чіткою. Уникайте помилок, таких як "grow through" замість "go through". Також краще розділити думки на дві речення, використовуючи зв'язки для логічності. Наприклад, спочатку підтвердьте наявність пішохідних переходів, а потім додайте проблему з пішоходами, які не дотримуються правил.

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my family-oriented neighborhood. However, some people cross the street carelessly, which can be disturbing for drivers.

제안: Ваша відповідь є зрозумілою, але можна зробити її більш структурованою і природною. Використовуйте зв'язки, щоб логічно поєднати думки, і уникайте невизначених фраз, таких як "maybe". Краще чітко вказати, де саме ви хотіли б додати пішохідні переходи.

예시: I think the traffic is generally good because there are many crosswalks, which makes walking comfortable. However, I would like to add a few more crosswalks near busy intersections to improve safety.

× people manage to grow through just whenever they want

✓ people manage to cross whenever they want

The phrase 'grow through' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'cross' when referring to moving across a street or crosswalk. Using the correct verb improves clarity and accuracy.

× there are a lot of crosswalks in different places

✓ there are a lot of crosswalks in different places

This sentence is correct as it stands; no correction needed.

× But still there are some places maybe where I want to add a few.

✓ But there are still some places where I would like to add a few.

The original sentence has awkward word order and misplaced adverbs. Rearranging the sentence improves clarity and naturalness. 'Maybe' is better omitted or repositioned, and 'would like' is more polite and appropriate for expressing desire.