Traffic— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“crossword”应为“crosswalks”，句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰。建议注意单复数形式，避免语法错误，并且回答时尽量简洁明了，避免重复和语无伦次。

예시: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood. I think they are very important because they help people cross the street safely and reduce accidents.

제안: 回答中表达不够准确，存在语法错误和用词错误，如“bend some bicycle”应为“ban some bicycles”。建议加强语法和词汇的准确性，使用恰当的词汇表达观点，并且提供更具体的细节支持观点。

예시: Yes, I would like to change some traffic regulations. For instance, there are too many motorbikes which cause traffic jams. I think the government should ban some motorbikes to improve traffic flow.

× Yes, there are still crossword in my neighborhood umm I in my view it is very common to have a lot of crosswalks nearby because it really help people to cross the street safely and also it were.

✓ Yes, there are still crosswalks in my neighborhood. Umm, in my view, it is very common to have a lot of crosswalks nearby because they really help people to cross the street safely and also they are.

这里的“crossword”应为复数形式“crosswalks”，因为前面用了“are”，表示复数。动词“help”应加-s变为“helps”或主语改为复数“they help”，这里主语是复数“crosswalks”，所以用“help”。“it were”应改为“they are”，因为指代复数“crosswalks”，且时态应为现在时。建议注意名词的单复数形式和主谓一致。

× Oh yes, there are some traffic regulations I would like to change in the future. For example, there are a large number of motor bicycles, which really make the traffic congestion. I think the government should bend some bicycle.

✓ Oh yes, there are some traffic regulations I would like to change in the future. For example, there are a large number of motorbicycles, which really cause traffic congestion. I think the government should ban some bicycles.

“motor bicycles”应写作一个词“motorbicycles”，且应为复数形式。动词“make”搭配“traffic congestion”不太合适，改为“cause”更准确。最后一句中“bend some bicycle”应为“ban some bicycles”，动词“ban”表示禁止，且“bicycles”应为复数。建议注意名词复数形式和动词搭配的准确性。