Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'All yes definitely' and use correct tense, e.g., 'when my parents give me allowance'. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to improve flow.

예시: Yes, I definitely love shopping. However, I don't go often because I am not working yet and have a limited budget. I usually shop when my parents give me an allowance.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured and natural. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor errors like 'electric nick items' to 'electronic items'.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices of certain items, such as clothes and electronic products, because I want to find something affordable but of good quality. Since I am not working, I have to be careful with my budget.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. For example, 'choosing between icons' is confusing; perhaps you meant 'items'. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to clarify your points.

예시: Honestly, I sometimes find it difficult to choose between items when I shop, especially clothes. Therefore, I usually take a family member, like my cousin, with me to help me decide.

제안: Your answer has several language errors and unclear phrases like 'brand bread, sword'. Try to express your opinion clearly and use specific examples. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'All that's interesting question'.

예시: That's an interesting question. I believe expensive products are not always better because some cheaper brands offer good quality but are less popular due to lower demand in the market.

× All yes definitely I love shopping.

✓ Yes, definitely, I love shopping.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and punctuation. Adding commas and rearranging words improves clarity and correctness.

× I go shopping when my parents gave me allowance.

✓ I go shopping when my parents give me allowance.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past tense 'gave'. Since the action is habitual, both verbs should be in present tense.

× I do not have enough budget as I'm not working yet.

✓ I do not have enough of a budget as I'm not working yet.

'Budget' is a countable noun here and requires an article or quantifier. Adding 'of a' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× I compare prices of certain items such as clothes an electric nick items all the time because I want a product which is cheaper and is of best quality.

✓ I compare prices of certain items such as clothes and electronic items all the time because I want a product which is cheaper and of the best quality.

'An electric nick items' is incorrect; it should be 'and electronic items'. Also, 'of best quality' requires the definite article 'the' to be correct.

× Honestly, I have problems in choosing between icons whenever I go shopping.

✓ Honestly, I have problems choosing between options whenever I go shopping.

'Icons' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'options'. Also, 'problems in choosing' is better expressed as 'problems choosing'.

× It usually happens when I go for clothes shopping at a time.

✓ It usually happens when I go clothes shopping at a time.

The phrase 'go for clothes shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go clothes shopping'.

× I take one of my family members like my cousin with me so that they can help me choosing the item.

✓ I take one of my family members, like my cousin, with me so that they can help me choose the item.

'Help me choosing' is incorrect; after 'help', the base form of the verb 'choose' should be used. Also, commas improve clarity around 'like my cousin'.

× All that's interesting question.

✓ That's an interesting question.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting it to 'That's an interesting question' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× Well, I suppose that expensive things are not always better because some cheaper brand bread, sword, good quality an are not popular because they have fewer demands in market.

✓ Well, I suppose that expensive things are not always better because some cheaper brands are good quality and are not popular because they have less demand in the market.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'brand bread, sword' is incorrect and likely meant 'brands'; 'good quality an' is incorrect and should be 'good quality and'; 'fewer demands' should be 'less demand' because 'demand' is uncountable; 'in market' requires the definite article 'the'.