Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "helped me an why an relax". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, trực tiếp và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax after a busy day at work. I usually go shopping once a month to buy things I need.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ từ "Dale" nên là "deal". Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do so sánh giá cả cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices to get the best deal. For example, I check prices online and in different stores before making a purchase to save money.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi chính tả. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: It depends on what I am buying. If the item is necessary, I usually find it easy to choose. However, when there are many options, it can be quite difficult to decide.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ sản phẩm đắt tiền có chất lượng tốt hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe expensive products are usually better because their price reflects the materials and craftsmanship used, which often results in higher quality.

× I think shopping is an activity that helped me an why an relax after work day and I often go shopping every month.

✓ I think shopping is an activity that helps me unwind and relax after a work day, and I often go shopping every month.

The verb 'helped' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here; the present tense 'helps' is appropriate because the sentence describes a habitual action. Also, 'an why an relax' is incorrect and should be 'unwind and relax'.

× I often check the price at home in the online shop or another shop before buying anything.

✓ I often check the price at home on the online shop or another shop before buying anything.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to websites or online shops; 'on' is the correct preposition to use with online platforms.

× I have no idea about this question because this depends on what I'm going to buy.

✓ I have no idea about this question because it depends on what I'm going to buy.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used; 'it' should be used to refer back to the subject of the sentence for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× For example, if it is really necessary for me, I want. B. Difficult to choice, but if they are too much. Selection I think is is really difficult.

✓ For example, if it is really necessary for me, I don't find it difficult to choose, but if there is too much selection, I think it is really difficult.

The original sentence has fragmented and incorrect pronoun usage. 'I want. B.' is unclear and likely a typo. 'Difficult to choice' should be 'difficult to choose'. 'They are too much selection' is incorrect; 'there is too much selection' is correct. Also, 'is is' is a repetition error.

× Yes, I think so because. The price is depends on how it makes an what it makes by.

✓ Yes, I think so because the price depends on how it is made and what it is made of.

The phrase 'how it makes an what it makes by' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'how it is made and what it is made of', using the passive voice and correct prepositions.

× So the expensive one has the. Better quality.

✓ So the expensive one has better quality.

The article 'the' before 'Better quality' is unnecessary and incorrectly placed. Also, 'quality' is uncountable and does not need 'the' in this context.