Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear and natural English. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because I like choosing my own clothes. Besides clothes, I also shop for groceries and household items to meet my daily needs.

제안: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Use simpler, clearer sentences and linking words to explain your reasoning.

예시: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to find good quality products. Although price is not the most important factor, I prefer to buy items that have better quality even if they cost a bit more.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to make choices because there are many options available. Therefore, I often ask the shopkeeper for advice to help me decide which product is best.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Use clear sentences and relevant vocabulary to express your opinion with supporting reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they are made with higher quality materials. They tend to be more durable and last longer, which makes them more valuable in the long run.

× Yes, I like shopping very much as it is a my taste to buy my own favorite clothes, but I also prefer to work with sharp other things such as grocery and household.

✓ Yes, I like shopping very much as it is my taste to buy my own favorite clothes, but I also prefer to work with other things such as groceries and household items.

The article 'a' before 'my taste' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive adjective and does not require an article. Also, 'sharp other things' is incorrect; it should be 'other things'. 'Grocery' should be pluralized to 'groceries' to refer to various items, and 'household' should be 'household items' for clarity.

× The things which are given to me by my.

✓ The things which are given to me by others.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper object after 'my'. It should specify who gives the things, such as 'others' or 'my family' to complete the thought.

× Yes, so I have a habit to compare prices are in different types of things but I have to pick out of the greater quality of a productive as the price doesn't matter for me but while shopping.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of comparing prices for different types of things, but I have to pick products of better quality as the price doesn't matter to me while shopping.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. 'Habit to compare prices are' is incorrect; it should be 'habit of comparing prices'. 'Greater quality of a productive' is incorrect; it should be 'products of better quality'. Also, 'but while shopping' is misplaced and should be integrated properly.

× So if a good quality productive is attainable in less were apprised and I will surely go for it.

✓ So if a good quality product is available at a lower price, I will surely go for it.

'Attainable in less were apprised' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'available at a lower price'. 'Productive' should be 'product'.

× I mostly prefer to the shopkeeper to give me some advice is about the clothing or any other product that I go for shopping but do too many options.

✓ I mostly prefer the shopkeeper to give me some advice about the clothing or any other product that I buy, but with too many options,

'Prefer to the shopkeeper' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer the shopkeeper'. 'Advice is about' should be 'advice about'. 'Go for shopping' should be 'buy'. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring.

× I get confused during the shopping and it is very difficult to uncover table to make a choice is from their products.

✓ I get confused during shopping, and it is very difficult to make a choice from their products.

'Uncover table' is incorrect and unclear; it should be removed. 'Make a choice is from their products' is incorrect; it should be 'make a choice from their products'.

× Yes I think except expensive product are more better than the cheaper ones as the expensive productive container good quality producter.

✓ Yes, I think expensive products are better than the cheaper ones as the expensive products contain good quality material.

'Except expensive product' is incorrect; it should be 'expensive products'. 'More better' is redundant; 'better' suffices. 'Productive container good quality producter' is incorrect; it should be 'products contain good quality material'.

× Also the raw material used in it is very good goal T Also they are very durable and long lasting so I can profit too.

✓ Also, the raw material used in them is very good. They are very durable and long-lasting, so I can benefit from them too.

'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'products'. 'Goal T' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'good'. 'Profit too' is incorrect in this context; 'benefit from them too' is appropriate.