Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "Shopping allows me to explore different styles and find unique items." Also, use linking words like "for example" properly and ensure the sentence flows smoothly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to explore different styles and find unique items. For example, I like visiting the local market where I can discover handmade products and support small businesses.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Avoid unclear phrases like "when I shall be" or "This happened made me feel interest." Use linking words like "because" and "for example" properly to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I usually compare prices because it helps me save money. For example, before buying clothes, I check many online platforms to make sure I get good value for my budget.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct word forms and clearer expressions. For example, say "I think it is difficult to make choices when I shop, especially when many similar products are available." Also, use linking words like "because" to explain reasons clearly.

예시: I think it is difficult to make choices when I shop, especially when there are many similar products. For example, I often hesitate when buying clothes because I want to find high quality and get good value for my money.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like "I don't sing expensive product" or "sound quality is not good for example that she product." Try to give clear reasons and examples using linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes cheaper products have good quality. For example, handmade products can be original and valuable even if they are not expensive.

× Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it's allowed me to explore new different styles and find the unique item.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it has allowed me to explore new different styles and find unique items.

The phrase 'it's allowed' should be 'it has allowed' to correctly use the present perfect tense. Also, 'the unique item' should be 'unique items' to match plural context and natural usage.

× Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it's allowed me to explore new different styles and find the unique item.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping quite a lot because it has allowed me to explore different new styles and find unique items.

The order of adjectives 'new different' is incorrect; the correct order is 'different new' or better 'different new styles'. Also, 'the unique item' should be plural 'unique items' to fit the context.

× For example, I like visiting the local Mike market where I can discover the handmade products and to support a small business.

✓ For example, I like visiting the local Mike market where I can discover handmade products and support small businesses.

The preposition 'the' before 'handmade products' and 'a small business' is unnecessary here. Also, 'to support' should be parallel with 'discover' and not preceded by 'to'.

× Yes, and I usually compare prices when I shall be 'cause it had made to save money and deal with that job.

✓ Yes, and I usually compare prices when I shop because it helps me save money and handle that task.

'Shall be' is incorrect here; 'shop' is appropriate. 'Had made to save money' is incorrect; 'helps me save money' is correct modal verb usage and tense.

× For example, before buying clothes and I always check in many different styles of online platform to initial that I'm getting a good value for my budget.

✓ For example, before buying clothes, I always check many different styles on online platforms to ensure that I'm getting good value for my budget.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'and' is unnecessary. 'Initial' is incorrect; 'ensure' is the correct verb. 'In many different styles of online platform' should be 'many different styles on online platforms'.

× This happened made me feel interest.

✓ This made me feel interested.

'This happened made me feel interest' is incorrect. The correct form is 'This made me feel interested' using past tense and correct adjective form.

× Just I think it is very difficult to make choices when I show, especially when there are many similar products available for it once.

✓ I just think it is very difficult to make choices when I shop, especially when many similar products are available at once.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'Just I think' should be 'I just think'. 'Show' is a typo for 'shop'. 'Available for it once' should be 'available at once'.

× For example, when I buy clothes, I often hesitate too much because I want to find the high quality and father my money budget as well.

✓ For example, when I buy clothes, I often hesitate too much because I want to find high quality and get the most out of my budget as well.

'The high quality' should be 'high quality' without 'the'. 'Father my money budget' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get the most out of my budget'.

× No, I don't sing expensive product that all way better than cheaper ones because.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because.

'Sing' is a typo for 'think'. 'Product' should be plural 'products'. 'That all way' should be 'are always'.

× Sound quality is not good for example that she product like they are from had made so it is originally an is a good value for listen to buy.

✓ For example, sound quality is not good for some products that are handmade, so originally they are a good value to buy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to proper sentence structure with correct verb forms and clearer meaning.