Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子稍显冗长且重复“weekend days”，建议简化表达并避免重复。可以更直接地表达观点，同时增加一些具体细节。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy shopping. I usually go with my friend on weekends because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy week.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“use the lowest cost to buy something what I want”。建议注意语法准确性，表达更简洁明了，并补充具体原因。

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to find the best deal and save money when buying things I need.

제안: 回答中充满了语气词和重复，表达不流畅且语法错误较多。建议减少填充词，使用完整句子，并清晰表达原因。

예시: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices because I have to compare the prices and quality of different products carefully before deciding.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（如“a high process equals I high quality”），且观点过于简单。建议纠正语法错误，表达更准确，并尝试提供具体理由或例子。

예시: I think expensive products are often better because higher price usually means better quality and materials, but it's not always the case.

× I always go shopping with my friend, especially on weekend days because I think it's a good way to relax and reduce my stress after busy weekend days.

✓ I always go shopping with my friends, especially on weekends because I think it's a good way to relax and reduce my stress after busy weekends.

这里“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常人们会和多个朋友一起购物；“weekend days”应简化为“weekends”，更自然且符合习惯用法。

× Of course, I always compare price when I shop because I want to use the lowest cost to buy something what I want.

✓ Of course, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to use the lowest cost to buy something I want.

“price”应为复数“prices”，因为比较的是多个商品的价格；“something what I want”中“what”多余，应去掉。

× Of course, I always compare price when I shop because I want to use the lowest cost to buy something what I want.

✓ Of course, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to use the lowest cost to buy something I want.

“something what I want”中“what”用法错误，应直接用“something I want”。

× I would say yes, uh, I think it's very hard to uh do decision for me umm, because I need to uh compare their uh prices and uh quality uh, of these products uh and uh, I will think.

✓ I would say yes. I think it's very hard to make decisions for me because I need to compare the prices and quality of these products, and I have to think carefully.

“do decision”用法错误，应为“make decisions”；句子结构混乱，需调整使其更通顺自然。

× I would say yes, uh, I think it's very hard to uh do decision for me umm, because I need to uh compare their uh prices and uh quality uh, of these products uh and uh, I will think.

✓ I would say yes. I think it's very hard to make decisions for me because I need to compare the prices and quality of these products, and I have to think carefully.

“prices and quality”中“prices”应为复数，且“quality”作为不可数名词使用正确。

× Well, I believe that is true because because I think a high process equals I high quality.

✓ Well, I believe that is true because I think a high price equals high quality.

“process”应为“price”，且“I high quality”中“I”错误，应去掉。