Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. For example, say "I prefer shopping online to shopping in physical stores." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'shopping' too much.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping, but I prefer shopping online to shopping in physical stores because it's more convenient.

제안: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases like 'buy time quality' and 'pay low salary.' Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say "I always compare prices because I want good quality at a reasonable price, but I don't compromise on quality."

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get good quality products at reasonable prices, but I never compromise on quality by buying cheap items.

제안: Good direct answer and supporting details. To improve, avoid filler phrases like 'or whatever it is' and use linking words for coherence. Also, correct minor grammar errors like 'I'm I gonna' to 'I'm going to.'

예시: No, it's not difficult because I always make a list before shopping. Therefore, I know exactly what I need, even when buying clothes.

제안: Try to use more natural expressions and linking words. For example, say "It's difficult to say, but I generally think expensive products are better because they use higher quality materials. However, this is not always the case."

예시: It's hard to say for sure, but I generally believe that expensive products are better since they often use higher quality materials. However, this is not always true.

× I love shopping but I prefer to shop online than in physical store.

✓ I love shopping but I prefer to shop online rather than in a physical store.

The phrase 'prefer to shop online than in physical store' is incorrect because 'prefer' is usually followed by 'rather than' when comparing two options. Also, 'in physical store' lacks an article; it should be 'in a physical store'. The correct form is 'prefer to shop online rather than in a physical store.'

× Yeah, of course everybody do.

✓ Yeah, of course everybody does.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires the third person singular verb form 'does' instead of 'do'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I prefer to buy time quality and pay low salary, but I don't want to buy cheap clothes or cheap product which is bad quality, so I don't compromise.

✓ I prefer to buy good quality items and pay a low price, but I don't want to buy cheap clothes or cheap products which are of bad quality, so I don't compromise.

The phrase 'buy time quality' is incorrect; it should be 'buy good quality items'. 'Pay low salary' is incorrect because 'salary' refers to wages; the correct term is 'pay a low price'. Also, 'cheap product' should be plural 'cheap products' to match the context. 'Which is bad quality' should be 'which are of bad quality' to agree with plural 'products' and use correct preposition.

× No, not really. I always know what I'm I gonna buy because I always have a list when I am in a shop or in a store or whatever it is.

✓ No, not really. I always know what I'm going to buy because I always have a list when I am in a shop or a store or whatever it is.

The phrase 'I'm I gonna buy' is ungrammatical and redundant. It should be 'I'm going to buy'. Also, 'in a shop or in a store' is repetitive; 'a shop or a store' is sufficient. The correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Product is expensive because they are using better materials and it's better quality.

✓ Products are expensive because they use better materials and have better quality.

'Product is expensive' should be plural 'Products are expensive' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'they are using' is better as 'they use' for general statements. 'It's better quality' should be 'have better quality' to agree with plural 'products'.