Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免简单重复，表达更自然流畅。可以增加具体原因或例子，使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax after a busy day and I often find unique items that make me happy.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to make sure I get the best value for my money before buying anything.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并且逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I often find it hard to choose between two items I like because my parents usually don't allow me to buy both.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚表达观点并举例说明。

예시: I don't believe expensive products are always better because sometimes cheaper items offer more practical features and better value for money.

× Absolutely, it is common that comparing prices when you shop, because if I think this thing is not worth of this price, I would not buy, I would not buy it and change the store and compare prices.

✓ Absolutely, it is common to compare prices when you shop, because if I think this thing is not worth this price, I would not buy it and would change the store to compare prices.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用不定式to compare而不是comparing。这里表达习惯用法是it is common to do sth，而不是it is common that doing sth。

× if I think this thing is not worth of this price

✓ if I think this thing is not worth this price

短语'worth'后面不需要介词'of'，直接接名词或代词。错误使用了'worth of'，应改为'worth'。

× other thing is not bad, so bad I will hesitate

✓ another thing is not bad, so I will hesitate

这里指的是另一件事物，应该用单数形式'another thing'，而不是'other thing'。另外，'so bad I will hesitate'语序和表达不正确，改为'so I will hesitate'更通顺。

× for me it is difficult to make choices when you shop

✓ for me it is difficult to make choices when I shop

句子主语是第一人称，后面不应使用第二人称'you'，应保持一致使用第一人称'I'。

× Choices between these two things because my parents don't allow me to buy both.

✓ I have to choose between these two things because my parents don't allow me to buy both.

句子缺少主语，且表达不完整，应补充主语'I have to choose'使句子完整。

× To be honest, I don't think so, because some expensive products are are not are not so important and just don't have some practical functions, but some.

✓ To be honest, I don't think so, because some expensive products are not so important and just don't have some practical functions, but some cheaper ones do.

句子中重复了'are are not'，且句子结构不完整，缺少谓语部分，需删除重复部分并补充完整句子。

× But the cheaper ones always have several advantages that are better than expensive products.

✓ But the cheaper ones always have several advantages that are better than those of expensive products.

比较时应明确比较对象，'better than expensive products'表达不完整，需补充'those of'表示比较的是优势。