Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to buy things I like, which makes me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ lý do tại sao bạn so sánh giá cả.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices online and in stores because I want to find the best deal and save money.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho câu trả lời của bạn.

예시: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices because there are many beautiful items, and I like all of them, so I find it hard to pick just one.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của mình.

예시: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better because they often contain higher quality ingredients or materials compared to cheaper ones.

× Yes I do because shopping is my hobbies and when I shopping I have buy the favorite things and so I can feel happy and comfortable when I buy their favorite things.

✓ Yes, I do because shopping is my hobby and when I shop I buy my favorite things, so I feel happy and comfortable when I buy my favorite things.

The word 'hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' because 'shopping' is singular. 'When I shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I shop' (verb form). 'I have buy' is incorrect; it should be 'I buy'. Also, 'their favorite things' should be 'my favorite things' to match the subject. These corrections fix singular/plural and verb form errors.

× Yes I do. I always compare price when I go shopping compare price in the Internet and in the shop or if the shop is cheaper I I want I can to buy and if the shop is expensive I I want to.

✓ Yes, I do. I always compare prices when I go shopping, comparing prices on the Internet and in the shop. If the shop is cheaper, I want to buy, and if the shop is expensive, I don't want to.

The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'I want I can to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to buy'. The phrase 'I want to' is completed with 'don't want to' for the expensive shop. These fix plural and sentence structure issues.

× Yeah it is because when I go shopping is have many items and the item is very beautiful and all the item I I like. So I have difficult to choose the one of the things I like.

✓ Yeah, it is because when I go shopping, there are many items and the items are very beautiful and all the items I like. So I have difficulty choosing one of the things I like.

'Is have many items' is incorrect; it should be 'there are many items' (there be issue and plural). 'The item is very beautiful' should be 'the items are very beautiful' (plural). 'All the item' should be 'all the items'. 'I have difficult' should be 'I have difficulty'. 'To choose the one of the things' should be 'choosing one of the things'. These fix plural, verb, and sentence structure errors.

× Yes, I do, because the expensive product is half a mug in the good ingredient and so the expensive product is then yes, OK, then the cheaper one.

✓ Yes, I do, because the expensive product has better ingredients, so the expensive product is better than the cheaper one.

'Is half a mug in the good ingredient' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'has better ingredients'. 'Then yes, OK, then' is removed for clarity. 'Then' is corrected to 'than' for comparison. These fix plural, word choice, and comparison errors.