Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法ミス（"I really like go there"）があり、より流暢にするために修正が必要です。また、内容を豊かにするために、なぜそれらの店が好きか具体的な理由を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially at clothes stores, bookstores, and bike shops. I often go there with my mother because we both like exploring new items and spending time together.

제안: 文法の誤り（"the if it is the same product"）があり、文章が不自然です。より明確で自然な表現に直し、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because if the products are the same, I prefer to buy from the cheaper store to save money.

제안: 文法ミス（"decidedly person"は不自然、"if if"の繰り返し）があります。より自然な表現に直し、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

예시: I don't find it difficult to make choices because I am a decisive person. If I like a product, I usually decide to buy it quickly.

제안: 文が不完全で繰り返し（"most most time"）があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で論理的な構成にし、具体的な理由を述べることが必要です。

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better, but most of the time, especially for clothes, higher-priced items tend to have better quality and texture.

× I really like go there too with my mother.

✓ I really like going there too with my mother.

After verbs like 'like', the verb that follows should be in the '-ing' form to indicate the activity enjoyed.

× I compare the prices because I think the if it is the same product I would like to buy it in this cheaper place.

✓ I compare prices because I think if it is the same product, I would like to buy it in the cheaper place.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'prices' in this context. Also, 'the if' is incorrect; 'if' should stand alone. 'This cheaper place' should be 'the cheaper place' to refer to a specific place.

× I am really decidedly person, so I if if there is a merchandise that I like, I really decided to buy soon.

✓ I am really a decisive person, so if there is merchandise that I like, I really decide to buy it soon.

'Decidedly person' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'decisive' and requires the article 'a'. 'If if' is a repetition error. 'Merchandise' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The verb tense should be present to match the context.

× I think it's not always but the most most time I think it is better than the cheaper one because I think especially the clothes it the higher prices 1 is better like the texture is good and.

✓ I think it's not always true, but most of the time I think it is better than the cheaper one because I think especially clothes with higher prices are better, like the texture is good.

'The most most time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time'. 'The clothes it the higher prices 1 is better' is ungrammatical; it should be 'clothes with higher prices are better'. Articles and sentence structure need correction for clarity.