Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य संरचना और शब्दों का चयन सुधारने की आवश्यकता है ताकि यह अधिक प्राकृतिक और प्रभावी लगे। उदाहरण के लिए, 'I do shopping of' की जगह 'I shop for' या 'I buy' का उपयोग करें। साथ ही, उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और सटीक बनाएं।

예시: Yes, I like shopping. I often shop for sunglasses, food items, and clothes.

제안: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य संरचना और शब्दों का चयन सुधारें। 'Shop of clothes' की जगह 'clothing stores' कहें। साथ ही, उत्तर को अधिक संगठित और स्पष्ट बनाने के लिए लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

예시: Yes, I compare prices because many stores charge more than the actual value. For example, some clothing stores sell the same quality clothes at higher prices than others.

제안: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्द चयन में सुधार की जरूरत है। 'I decided at my home' की जगह 'I decide at home' कहें। साथ ही, वाक्यों को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाएं।

예시: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices because I decide at home what I need, so I don't waste money on things that are not useful.

제안: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्दों का चयन सुधारें। 'It's not compulsory' की जगह 'It's not necessary' कहें। वाक्यों को संक्षिप्त और स्पष्ट बनाएं और लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

예시: It's not necessary that expensive products are better than cheaper ones because often the material is the same. However, expensive clothes usually have brand names, which is why people buy them.

× I do shopping of many different things.

✓ I do shopping for many different things.

The phrase 'do shopping of' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'do shopping' is 'for'. So, it should be 'do shopping for many different things.'

× Like I do shopping of my sunglasses and my eatables and also my clothes.

✓ Like I do shopping for my sunglasses, my eatables, and also my clothes.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used after 'do shopping'. The correct preposition is 'for'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× there are many shops in my country who have higher price than the original price of the material.

✓ there are many shops in my country that have higher prices than the original price of the material.

'Shops' are objects, so 'that' should be used instead of 'who'. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' to match 'many shops'.

× Like some shop of clothes have greater price than the other shop but the quality of the cloth was same.

✓ Like some shops of clothes have higher prices than other shops but the quality of the cloth is the same.

'Shop' should be plural 'shops' to match 'some'. 'Price' should be plural 'prices'. 'Other shop' should be plural 'other shops'. Also, 'was' should be 'is' to maintain present tense.

× but the quality of the cloth was same.

✓ but the quality of the cloth is the same.

The sentence is talking about a general fact, so present tense 'is' should be used instead of past tense 'was'.

× because I decided at my home that one thing that I need and I don't waste my money on that things that is not usable for me.

✓ because I decide at my home the one thing that I need and I don't waste my money on things that are not usable for me.

The sentence mixes past tense 'decided' with present tense 'need' and 'don't waste'. To maintain consistency, present tense 'decide' is better here. Also, 'that things' is incorrect; it should be 'things'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things'.

× I don't waste my money on that things that is not usable for me.

✓ I don't waste my money on those things that are not usable for me.

'That things' is incorrect; 'those things' is correct for plural. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'things'.

× It's not compulsory that the expensive products are better than cheaper one because both most of the time the stuff of the clothes of expensive as well as cheaper one are the same,

✓ It's not compulsory that the expensive products are better than cheaper ones because most of the time the stuff of the clothes of expensive as well as cheaper ones is the same,

'Cheaper one' should be plural 'cheaper ones' to match 'products'. 'Both' is unnecessary and confusing here. 'One' should be 'ones' to agree with plural. 'Are' should be 'is' because 'stuff' is singular.

× but only the expensive clothes have brand name, so that's why people buy that.

✓ but only the expensive clothes have brand names, so that's why people buy them.

'Brand name' should be plural 'brand names' to agree with 'clothes'. 'That' is incorrect pronoun here; 'them' refers correctly to 'clothes'.